The Swordman

[darkwoon]

I constantly put lengthy criticisms on the Artwork forum. Now it is your turn!
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Unfortunately, I was holding the drawing notepad in landscape mode, so I ran out of vertical space to draw more of that guy...

Shoot on sight, people! XD

[matt46]

wow. i envy you because i could never draw a face that amazing. my noses look like squidward and my lips look like some horrible botox injection. yours are fantastic. love the shading too....so jealous

[West Coast Sheriff]

Great drawing!

[AppealToReason]

Ugh. I need to brush up on my art terms before I can criticize anyone. I will say, the sword reminds me a little of a pencil because of the tip.
They guy is sexy though. :P
Wish I could offer criticism, but nice drawing.

[Noirtier]

Wow, just wow... I love it, I think it's really amazing :) The only thing I would comment on would be if there is anything you can do with the sword to make it look more like a sword, because as AppealToReason said, the tip makes it look a bit like a pencil because of the way it is shaded. Very well done though!

[Sleepy Raisin]

Did you want criticism? There is really not much to give, but the only thing(s) i see is the sword not quite looking like a sword but maybe like a spear? The chest seems to curve outward a little too much, if that makes sense.. And the hair is too sketchy compared to the rest of the drawing, but those are just very minor things, over all its absolutely great!!

[Mortal Coil]

If you wanted criticism then I can't give you any, because this drawing is fucking amazing. Very well-proportioned and nicely shaded :D

[Princess Ariel]

This is amazing and i've got nothing bad to say about it.. Keep it up!!

[darkwoon]

Thanks everybody! I take good note of the sword not looking like, well, a sword. I'll try to erase it and redo it in a more sword-ish way.

It might help if you don't draw with your eyes closed.
Looks like I've got another fan XD. Seriously, I'm ok if you don't like it, but it would have helped to know why you didn't like it...

[wild1]

Nice work. I like how the Swordsman is looking right at us.

[bigfoot]

i think its wonderful. great, really.