My Poems... What do you think?

[Brice]

Created of fire
Born of the flame
An angel of passion
Of lust for the game

Washed by water
Cleansed by the sea
A creature of divinity
Love is your key

Blown away by the wind
Moved by the air
A goddess of strength
Ever so fair

Risen from earth
Arise from the rock
A person of empathy
Your heart is your lock

Look like the sun
Walk in the light
Spread your wings
Prepare for flight

Be aware of shadows
Watch the dark
For you are Light
And Light is marked

Keep your spirit
Your wonderful soul
Jump with joy
For it's my heart you stole

[Brice]

Well, just 1 so far...

[West Coast Sheriff]

Everything sounded real good,l

[lou lou]

I really like them!

[Brice]

Thank you! I have about 57 of them, but this one is my most recent poem.

[root]

It's ok. It's not very creative;
you have four words per line and a strict rhyme scheme.
The idea of it is good though but the poetry is ehh...

[The Chameleon]

Cool