a poem from my past, SOUL

[LitBlackRose]

Like the purest white rose
That's been tainted but blood
My soul has be come as dark as night
Some may even this gives them a fright

It flows in the wind
So careless in free
It what u might think
But it's not all a cup of tea

This soul sits in the corner
All by itself with one one there
With one one to help is very unfair.
This soul is sad and forever will

Won't anyone help this lonely one
It had gone on hurting a ton
Please came clean this unholy soul
A soul as dark as coal

(Another poem a wrote 4 mouths ago , please tell me what you think)

[Foamy]

Not bad.

[LitBlackRose]

Not bad.

Thank you this ones a little different since I had mixed emotions at the time

[The Chameleon]

I like it

[West Coast Sheriff]

Good job, give ur self a pat on the back

[Dark_cloud98]

quite awesome, but not all poem's written by teenagers have to be dark, even though the best poem's are :)

[Aidan]

Like the purest white rose
That's been tainted but blood
My soul has be come as dark as night
Some may even this gives them a fright

It flows in the wind
So careless in free
It what u might think
But it's not all a cup of tea

This soul sits in the corner
All by itself with one one there
With one one to help is very unfair.
This soul is sad and forever will

Won't anyone help this lonely one
It had gone on hurting a ton
Please came clean this unholy soul
A soul as dark as coal

(Another poem a wrote 4 mouths ago , please tell me what you think)

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I really like your poem

Thanks for shareing it with vT

If you write more ( i hope you will) share them as well