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LitBlackRose
July 31st, 2012, 10:01 PM
You stand there on the side
With nothingness on your face
As if your soul was swept away by the tide
It has disappeared without a trace

Your head if filled with nothing
Your stare is only a blank
You worry not a single thing
As if a canvice with not paint

You sit there soundless
You sit there crying
Your soul is like a mist
But all you want is to be flying

Your mind is calm
But your heart feels panic
It can all be in your hands palm
But you are mindless but volcanic

(Please comment what you think)

Christheman
July 31st, 2012, 10:03 PM
you have moved me. not even joking

West Coast Sheriff
July 31st, 2012, 10:17 PM
Beautiful piece of art, give URSELF a pat on the back

LitBlackRose
July 31st, 2012, 10:20 PM
Beautiful piece of art, give URSELF a pat on the back

That's a lot ^-^

Foamy
July 31st, 2012, 10:29 PM
Damn.

LitBlackRose
July 31st, 2012, 10:31 PM
Damn.

Hehe is that good or bad ? ^-^