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LikeAJay
July 16th, 2012, 02:27 AM
There is a place in the galaxy.the milky way galaxy.there is life on this planet that seems to be covered in darkness.For these people there lving in "hell".For if they are good when they die they go into light. heaven.But if there not good when they die. they shall stay there in hell.The land these people walk is darkness.Once in a while there is some light thats want regain on this planet.But in all they can't.There is no happy and what makes "hell" even more worse is that the people are violence.crime is this planet.The world is unexspecting.you always have to watch your back cause if you dont woah consider yourself gone into death for if you have extremed terrible stuff you will stay there in hell but you will exscpirence worse pain till you see the light of heaven.But if you are good you will go to heaven and "he" will protect you.This place these people live on is Earth.This is a way to look at earth.Posibly the right way.
On the second day of 2015 the end of the world was released.Funny thing is thats tommorow.As if it matered .we live in "hell" and we know "He" will be taking care of me.Of us.Coming from a family who dosen't belive in "Him" because they say "seeing is beliving" and they never seen 'him" so.To me seeing is not beliving it is deciving.I know "he" is real and i now he will protect me.
The criminal rate is up;The world is "dying" tomorrow.I see like people killing dead bodies outside which freak me out and the is new years day but it feels like any normal day.I step outside to see whats happening i feel like im "burning" out here.Which is funny i always feel like im "burning"."Burning in hell".I always wanted to explore the world but wat world.Im here in Glendale Arizona.The worst place in America.I can't step one foot out side cause if i do i'll get killed.There is no positive affects to this day as of light is seen in the dark trying to tell people "stop killing stop killing stopppp Killllinggg!"I was watching him as he was shot.At this point i was actually happy that the world was gonna end.I was tired of noting getting by.Everyone getting killed and everyone will stay here in dust of a once planet that will no longer exist.As I know that not everyone is bad most of this population is.I bet you wont see a good person walking cause they will bie.I dont consider myself the lightness or the darkness but in the middle.I hope when this world comes to an end tommorow that "he" will except me.I know he will but it's just that i've been bad i've been failing.But if "he" takes in a criminal but not me that be bad.I don't wanna stay in a planet that won't exist but I think he will forgive me for all my sins i have done.
The time for the ending is 6:00 pm.Not at midnight what im shocked about.Well my family which I still love just left me by myself.I fell asleeep.It was 6:00 a.m. when i woke up and i watched the news countdown all day till it was 5:59.I admit I was scared I was praying till it hit 6:00 pm.
I wasnt dead.I walked out the door and no one was out in fact i looked every where i was alone.I just relised something.I was the only survior.How I was also thinking.I prayed.Then I walked around and saw like one person.
I asked them if they prayed they said yes.Maybe God gave us "belivers" and prayers a second chance.That night with no parents I slept.I felt haunted though by all the people that have died in this life.I counted everyoneon thisa new watch cause it show us how many people are alive.The number was 20,054,781. 9,005,846 was in USA. 68,548 Was in ARizona.9,457 Where in Glendale.I have a total of 98 friends. 0 survived.How do I know all this.It is the technology are world has.Strangly none of anything was off of me.I hate life even though he gave me a chance with who every friend was dead Then i thought of sometihing.I am here by myself i can do anything i wanna do.Then again everything was gone.

LitBlackRose
July 31st, 2012, 09:41 PM
I thinks its really good its the type of story I would love to read. I can't wait for more