Photography Camp

[Princess Ariel]

I've been at a photography camp all week, focusing on teaching manual. I'm by no means an expert. Just looking for some critiques. And uhh.. Yeah, Enjoy :D
Some of them are underexposed (actually the majority, but some work)


Water Droplets

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/WaterDroplets-PhotographyCamp.jpg

Spray Paint Me

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/SprayPaintMe-PhotographyCamp.jpg


Pink Umberella's

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/PinkUmberellas.jpg

Pathway

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/Pathway-PhotographyCamp.jpg

Graffiti

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/Graffiti-PhotographyCamp.jpg

Fuzzy

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/Fuzzy-PhotographyCamp.jpg

Flying Free

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/FlyingFree-PhotographyCamp.jpg

*note:I personally think this is my best shot out of all of them. But the sun hurts my eyes ><

Falling Down

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/FallingDown-PhotographyCamp.jpg


Dark World

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o481/Chickenswillrule/DarkWorld-PhotographyCamp.jpg




So, If you're still with me. Thanks for taking a look at my photo's. I have a lot more yes, but these are the one's strictly from my camp.

[Noirtier]

I agree with you about Flying Free, I think that is the best one out of them--the darkness of the bird as it's outlined against the blue sky and sun provides a great contrast, and I love the angle where you can still see the feathers on the end of the wing. Dark World I also thought was unique. Overall, very good photos!

[Cognizant]

It looks like a majority of them got deleted, which is a bummer. But from the ones I see, I like them. One thing i'm not a big fan of is the angles, but I guess that's a matter of personal taste.

[Princess Ariel]

I agree with you about Flying Free, I think that is the best one out of them--the darkness of the bird as it's outlined against the blue sky and sun provides a great contrast, and I love the angle where you can still see the feathers on the end of the wing. Dark World I also thought was unique. Overall, very good photos!

Thanks for your feedback. After I took the photo and looked at it. I shocked myself..




It looks like a majority of them got deleted, which is a bummer. But from the ones I see, I like them. One thing i'm not a big fan of is the angles, but I guess that's a matter of personal taste.

The deleting was a mistake on my behalf ><

Thanks for your feedback

[SamB]

I think you have some really great shots here, some could be improved, and I agree that the bird one is your best shot out of these. However, I know its difficult with a moving object, the tip of the wing at the bottom has been cut off a little bit, if this was not cut off and there was sky between it and the edge of the picture then it would make it a lot stronger.

I also agree with Pat, some of the angles do make me feel a bit uneasy and don't settle the eye as well as they could, one of these being the first one, its a good shot, but if you were straight on to it rather than above it at an angle ten it would just make it that much better.

[kateastrophe]

These are all really nice. I'm no expert or anything but I really like the one on the beach, the umbrellas really contrast with the rest of the image. :)

[Princess Ariel]

I think you have some really great shots here, some could be improved, and I agree that the bird one is your best shot out of these. However, I know its difficult with a moving object, the tip of the wing at the bottom has been cut off a little bit, if this was not cut off and there was sky between it and the edge of the picture then it would make it a lot stronger.

I also agree with Pat, some of the angles do make me feel a bit uneasy and don't settle the eye as well as they could, one of these being the first one, its a good shot, but if you were straight on to it rather than above it at an angle ten it would just make it that much better.

Thanks for the critique. I'm curious to know as well how they'll turn out. I plan on going back sometime this week.

These are all really nice. I'm no expert or anything but I really like the one on the beach, the umbrellas really contrast with the rest of the image. :)

Thanks :)

[StoneColdNicky]

These are really good! It's not my usual kind of thing, but I really like the umbrella one!

[Princess Ariel]

These are really good! It's not my usual kind of thing, but I really like the umbrella one!

I'm glad you like it.