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LandDownUnder_05
June 25th, 2005, 08:42 PM
Time lets out a high pitched yell
you bastard you just go to hell
i've tried too long
to make this work
honesty....
you're just a two faced jerk
trust turns quick to retaliate
but for love it seems it's just too late
devotion tries to comprimise
but sincerity is full of sour lies
but one holds tight, emotionless
love just seems so blind
it take sthe hurt and frees the pain
and watches all unwind...

iono where this came from, i just sat down, and wrote the first line cuz it came to my head, and the rest is just history..
not very good at all lol

Anonymous
June 25th, 2005, 08:53 PM
I liked it!!! :smile:

Oath
June 25th, 2005, 10:17 PM
Interesting and Great.