YOU

[fairybeleiver]

you said you would never try to hurt me,
but here i am crying because to you.
you say its for the best,
but the best for who.
you made me promise,
but what about you.

you never want to hear the words,
"i broke my promise"
but you will hear it.
you will see me,
but not the pain.
you will see the damage,
but not the reason.

[Zazu]

Really like the style of it and the emotion beinhd it gives a real 'kick', and I really like the way you've linked the lines together, nice job.

[underoath12192]

WONDERFUL!! I can connect with the poem and you made it broad enough to where people who've been in different situations can all relate with it. Really good poem. I wish I'd thought of it.

[fairybeleiver]

its about the love of my life actually, a guy called david. he hates what i do to myself and then he hurt me so much so i wrote this to get it out of my head. im glad you like it though