The Toxicity of Mind

[RedViper]

Another '99'.
It's partially auto-biographical.


The Toxicity of Mind
My mind is toxic. It poisons my thoughts and emotions until its venom flows through my veins. It takes me down to the depths of my past, forcing me to relive every tortured memory. It seems to burn every moment of happiness I’ve experienced in my life. It drowns present happiness with past pain. It forces the worst possible conclusion of every scenario to the surface of my mind. It keeps my pain from the outside world, hiding it within me, drowning me from the inside out. I cannot escape the toxicity of my own mind. It never ends.

[Breakeven]

^^^ ur good :D

[RedViper]

Thanks ^_^

[Incompris]

Sheesh you are good!!

[RedViper]

Sheesh you are good!!

Thanks!, It won't let me give you rep, I must have given you some recently or something, I'll try again later though :) :P

[Mad_Dog]

This is very, very good. Sounds loosely like something I would write. Nicely done.

[xXoblivionXx]

another great 99! I can feel a chill down my spine :D

[xDarkAngelx]

Wow, your good!

[Noirtier]

That is very good! I love the metaphor you use, saying your mind is toxic! And your verb choice, especially using the verb "drown"

[turtleman]

This has really helped me. What I mean is that I really relate to this, and this has shown some light to my current inside struggle; I struggle to analyse my personality and what exactly is wrong with me. So thank you :)