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RedViper
July 6th, 2012, 03:16 AM
The Living Dead
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=27252
Maria Brink Sugar Skull
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=27253
I Fucking Hate You!
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=27254
Faunadestia
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=29199
Not sure if I like this one ^^^^

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=29197

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=29223
I made the stencil for the crows :)
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=4832&pictureid=29198

Thoughts?

OrKing
July 6th, 2012, 05:43 AM
FUCKING AWESOME! For a lack of words as creative as the drawings, dude. Seriously awesome, not sure which one I like best; I love the shading and blood-text on the main zombie in the top one but I really like the way you've used the colors in the other two as well.

Keep it up man, for something so mentally ugly(?) (I don't know the right phrase to describe what I'm trying to say) their beautiful.

Caver
July 6th, 2012, 03:10 PM
These are amazing! I wish I was as brilliant, I can barely draw a few trees and scenery, let alone all that detail! :D

RedViper
September 25th, 2012, 07:02 PM
Three new pictures added :)

bigfoot
September 25th, 2012, 09:55 PM
dude those are fucking amazing!!!! I love the bird the best but they all rock!! do you fart talent?

OrKing
September 25th, 2012, 10:39 PM
Damn dude, those are all freaking amazing, the bird one is awesome and definitely my personal favorite so far. :D

West Coast Sheriff
September 25th, 2012, 11:37 PM
Kinda dark. Pretty cool. I like em.

RedViper
September 26th, 2012, 02:33 AM
Thanks guys :)

dude those are fucking amazing!!!! I love the bird the best but they all rock!! do you fart talent?

Fuckery, I was giving you rep, but accidentally clicked 'I disapprove' and it wont let me rep the same post twice so I can't give you good rep :s

Silver Assassin
September 26th, 2012, 02:51 PM
Some good quality shit there. My favourite is the eagle(?) keep the good work up, my friend!

RedViper
September 26th, 2012, 03:01 PM
Some good quality shit there. My favourite is the eagle(?) keep the good work up, my friend!
Thanks :) Its a Crow

Stryker125
September 26th, 2012, 03:01 PM
NICE! Bird.

RedViper
September 27th, 2012, 03:10 AM
One new pic :)

Breakeven
September 27th, 2012, 03:44 AM
wow i love them :D

Sleepy Raisin
September 28th, 2012, 06:06 PM
Thats reaaally good!! :D the first one is creepy! But cool! The bird one(s) are my favorite(s) :) :) :) :)

darkwoon
September 30th, 2012, 10:02 PM
mmm... Some comments!

The Living Dead
I'll be honest here: I didn't like it. Why? The anatomy of the characters is completely off, the blood spills are random and distracting, and the shadowing on the central character is wrong.

Dead in Roses
The pose is nice, and I like the treatment of the roses. The face lacks shadows - stronger contrast would help there.

3rd drawing
One word: anatomy. This picture doesn't work IMHO because the base anatomy is incorrect.

Mickey Mouse Salutes You
The theme is fun, and the "soft" effect of colors is nice. However, shadowing is lacking and/or incorrect.

Birds
I think you should have exploited the main axes and lines of strength of the bird to color the background - lines that would underline the movement and speed. The paint strokes effect is very decorative, though. Probably worth attempting a triplet of pictures as a wall/stairs ornament.

Flying Heart
Good work on smooth pencil handling (I guess it is pencil?). Shadowing is still not correct, though.

Overall thoughts: I think you should spend more time on basics - anatomy and lightning cannot really be avoided. Your "dark" themes would particularly benefit of a deeper light/shadow work.

Hope it helps!

Daracon
October 1st, 2012, 10:56 PM
I really love dark art, and your stuff is pretty awesome! I would like to see more in the future.

deadpie
October 6th, 2012, 03:48 PM
Hey dude, I'm enjoying the Mickey Mouse one the best! You're amazing at what you do, keep doing it! I see your also really good at drawing faces too, which is spectacular. Anyhow, post more if you have more.

Thanks for sharing. +repped

RedViper
October 8th, 2012, 09:44 AM
mmm... Some comments!

The Living Dead
I'll be honest here: I didn't like it. Why? The anatomy of the characters is completely off, the blood spills are random and distracting, and the shadowing on the central character is wrong.

Dead in Roses
The pose is nice, and I like the treatment of the roses. The face lacks shadows - stronger contrast would help there.

3rd drawing
One word: anatomy. This picture doesn't work IMHO because the base anatomy is incorrect.

Mickey Mouse Salutes You
The theme is fun, and the "soft" effect of colors is nice. However, shadowing is lacking and/or incorrect.

Birds
I think you should have exploited the main axes and lines of strength of the bird to color the background - lines that would underline the movement and speed. The paint strokes effect is very decorative, though. Probably worth attempting a triplet of pictures as a wall/stairs ornament.

Flying Heart
Good work on smooth pencil handling (I guess it is pencil?). Shadowing is still not correct, though.

Overall thoughts: I think you should spend more time on basics - anatomy and lightning cannot really be avoided. Your "dark" themes would particularly benefit of a deeper light/shadow work.

Hope it helps!
All those pictures were ones that I'd seen and then copied. I made the crow stencil from a picture I found on the Internet, I did the background myself though and obviously the ink/watercolour pencils. I edited The Living Dead
a bit but all shading and blood spills are the way they are in the original picture except for a small part where I smudged the ink and had to cover it. There are more Crows coming btw :)

Also, quick question: Why did you give them random names, although The Living Dead wasn't random. Most of them have names I just haven't put them in.

darkwoon
October 13th, 2012, 08:09 AM
Also, quick question: Why did you give them random names, although The Living Dead wasn't random. Most of them have names I just haven't put them in.
Sorry if I answer only now, I was somewhat lacking free time recently :°)

I give untitled pictures names so it is easier to understand which one I'm talking about. It sometimes happen that the OP adds or removes a picture in the middle of the serie, so simply numbering them is a road for failure. There is usually nothing special meant by those names, and definitely never any nasty thought or implied judgement behind them - they are meant to be convenient labels, and nothing else.

Now of course, if the author already gave titles, I'll use them. And if there is a single picture, I won't give it a name - there would be no use for me to do it.

In your specific case, in all honesty, I didn't notice there were titles when I wrote my initial comment (not all of them anyway). If the titles were already present, then my apologizes - I simply missed them, plain and simple!

Thepolice5291
October 13th, 2012, 10:32 AM
Wow, I Really love those picture especially the first one, you definitely have some talent the most I can do is stick men

Mortal Coil
October 15th, 2012, 08:10 AM
I like how bold they are! They can be a little disproportionate (like the first one) but they do capture the viewer's attention. Nice job!