Perfect Blood Stain

[Oath]

Perfect Blood Stain

Everyone seems perfect but me.
If they fall will they bleed?
Do they know what pain is?
Do they see me suffer?
Can they tell my life isn’t getting any better?

Once they tried to fix me.
They sent me away.
I wanted to leave.
But they changed their minds and made me stay.

One day I was beet.
When our eyes meet.
Kicking and screaming I lay there bleeding.

Scared and wondering if they will just go away.
Or wait and hurt me another day.

I would rather not be perfect.
Sometimes I can deal with the pain.
--No one likes a perfect blood stain.--

My other poems:
Death Dream
Feelings Poem

[-Silence]

The whole thing is great. :D

"If they fall will they bleed?"
That's an amazing line. I love it.

[kolte]

A little.....bloody.....but your in the right direction

[Oath]

Thank you.

A little.....bloody.....

Thats just my way of writing and expressing my self.

Check out my other poems:
Death Dream
Feelings poem

[the_hope_house]

very emotional...sounds deep. I like your use of self dialouge. :)

[Oath]

thanxs