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thegirlishere
July 3rd, 2012, 04:41 AM
I Write Songs But I'm Not Sure If I'm Any Good Or Anything
Here Is Some Of My Stuff, Please Tell Me If There Any Good

BULLET PROOF HEART
By Laura James

I Used Fall Hard When I'd See You Suddenly Smile.
Now I Know The Reason, Its Just Murdering Me Inside.
I Thought I Knew You So Bloody Well.
Now I've Faced Reality, I Cant Not Give A Shit.
So Now Im Choking On Your Name Boy. I Hope You Feel My Pain.
Feeling For You So Boy, While The Tears Start To Rain.
Drowning In The Flood Of Memories That Lie.
Now Just Grab The Damn Gun, Shooting Till I Die.
You Were My Fucking Everything.
The Reason I Still Bothered To Try To Make It Through Another Day.
I would Feel So Alive Looking In Your Deep Brown Eyes.
You Would Always Hold My Hand And Catch Me When I'd Fall.
And Now Here You Are Pushing Me Up Against The Walls.
You Played Me All Night Long, Said You Wanted Me.
But You Always Wanted That Other Bitch.
But Deep Inside You Know I Know Someday My Guy Really Will Be Here
But For The Moment
I'm Choking On Your Name Boy. I Hope You Feel My Pain.
Feeling For You So Boy, While The Tears Start To Rain.
Drowning In The Flood Of Memories That Lie.
Now Just Grab The Damn Gun, Shooting Till I Die.
I Thought I Loved You With All I Had.
You Were The Candle To My Dark, Then She Went And Blew You Out
So I Guess Its Time To Dance In The Dark
Cause I No Longer
Am Choking On Your Name Boy. Feeling Any Pain.
No More Feeling For You Boy, Cause He's Wiped My Tears Away.
Escaping All The Memories That Were Burning Me Like An Art.
I Guess Now You Know This For Sure.
I Have A Bullet Proof Heart.



MISTAKE?
its like everything's going wrong today
like my words just fade away
like now i cant see the light
and the end it out of sight
I'm freaking out so badly
what the hell is happening
if i turn will you be there
or have you just disappeared

cause you know i need you always there
but my side and every where
cause you've got me drawn into you
but can i know I'm the one you choose
should i have put my faith in you
was it a stupid thing to do
will you go.....no
i don't think so



4U (Shes not the only one)
Shes not the only one that needs ya baby
Shes not the only one whos heart is breaking
I know i just wanna be there with you
I'll be there in every direction
she'll be there for a little attention
Dontcha know should be the one you choose
Cause baaaaaby
youve got so much to loose
and maaaaybe
im the one for you
so dont haaate me
for wantin to be true
Cause im there
you know i'll be there
4 U


and heres one my friend wrote:

"I'll try!" she said as he walked away,
"try not to lose you."
Two vibrant hearts could change.
Nothing tears the being more than deception,
unmasked fear.
"I'll be here waiting" tested and secure.

Nothing hurts my world,
just affects the ones around me.
When sin's deep in my blood,
you'll be the one to fall.

"I wish I could be the one,
the one who won't care at all.
But being the one on the stand,
I know the way to go, no one's guiding me.
When time soaked with blood turns its back,
I know it's hard to fall.
Confided in me was your heart.
I know it's hurting you, but it's killing me."

Nothing will last in this life
our time is spent constructing,
now you're perfecting a world... meant to sin.
Constrict your hands around me,
squeeze till I cannot breathe,
this air tastes dead inside me,
contribute to our plague.
Break all your promises,
tear down this steadfast wall,
restraints are useless here,
tasting salvation's near.

Nothing hurts my world,
just affects the ones around me
When sin's deep in my blood,
you'll be the one to fall.

"I wish I could be the one,
the one who won't care at all
But being the one on the stand,
I know the way to go, no one's guiding me.
When time soaked with blood turns its back,
I know it's hard to fall.
Confided in me was your heart.
I know it's hurting you, but it's killing me."