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rEpReSsIoN.?
July 31st, 2007, 04:24 PM
See me,
Believe me,
I can hear you,
I can taste you,
Your not alone,
But i'm alone,
For you have me,
look AT ME!!!,
NOW!!,
NOW!!

you will see,
but i am blind from your touch,
For i don't want you to see,
Close your eyes and let me touch,

Darkness is bliss,
Like stupidity,
Like me,
Darkness is when I watch...
YOU!!!!!!!!

Zazu
August 4th, 2007, 04:59 PM
Don't know if I like the whole capitals things that is going on, but like the style of it, flows nicely.

underoath12192
August 6th, 2007, 01:50 AM
Quite creepy! But that's good! I really liked it though I'm a little confused about the stupidity part. But great poem overall!