vitorioso
June 30th, 2012, 07:17 PM
According to my teacher this is one of the best creative works that she has ever read by a student. Personally to me I believe it is mediocre at best and is full of grammar errors (mainly run-on sentences and missing words). This also relates to Slender Man and can be seen as a prequel to the series Marble Hornets, so it will make a lot more sense if you have a bit of background knowledge. Please critique as you wish. Enjoy.
The formatting on VT is stupid so here is the link to it on my LiveJournal: http://sirnot1.livejournal.com/1366.html
The formatting on VT is stupid so here is the link to it on my LiveJournal: http://sirnot1.livejournal.com/1366.html