untititled--couldn't think of what to call it

[LoSt_n_the_WoRlD]

When i look into your eyes,
all i see is pain.
Andwhile i look i realize something,
only that you're driving ME insane.
But can we be together?
Can i handle all that you need to gain?
Is this worth my hardships?
If you will never feel the same.
NOw, i turn onto you
can you handle MY fame?
Because if you can't
do you realize your going to be living a life of shame?
This can work you know this right?
because when it does we're going to be living a life ,together, rid of PAIN.

-Molly


:oops: maybe you could think of a name for me? thank you!

[-Silence]

Wow, I like it! :D
Sorry, I don't know what could be a title though.

[WakeUp]

Maybe call it just "Pain" cuz its a main feature of the poem:

all i see is pain.
worth my hardships?
together, rid of PAIN.

Amazing writing! :)

[LoSt_n_the_WoRlD]

thank you! i love writing!!! its just so easy to express yourself

[LoSt_n_the_WoRlD]

thank you thank you!

[Oath]

Its great...loved it!