The Boy Was Strong (poem)

[Brighter.Tomorrow]

The boy had to stay strong and refused to cry.
So God cried for him, and as God did the clouds began to pour.
The weight was lifted off the boy's shoulders.
Only then was the boy able, to let his sadness fall.

[Mortal Coil]

It's a cool idea, I think it could use a little development though. Maybe you could add some stanzas, give it rhyme and/or meter?

[BenjiJoelCorrea]

I Like it..Its Pretty Good :)

[spiderdude]

It's good though you should make it longer and change the name to fit the poem more

[Montesquieu15]

It's a cool idea, I think it could use a little development though. Maybe you could add some stanzas, give it rhyme and/or meter?

yah, you have the idea down. just need the rest of the plot, you know?

[Breakeven]

its good ^_^

[OregonStateDude]

Wow, that was deep.

You gotta wonder why the boy was so sad. Were his parents assholes and they beat him? Was he gay and had trouble accepting it? So many possibilities.