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SinisterMystery
June 8th, 2012, 09:49 PM
and I don't know if I should continue. Can someone please give me some feedback?
http://www.quotev.com/story.php/1406812/Until-The-End/1/
abdheuuuchjc
June 8th, 2012, 09:51 PM
Very intriguing, send me the links of ur continued parts
SinisterMystery
June 8th, 2012, 09:53 PM
I assume you clicked next and read the first chapter? (yes I know that it's small -.- )
abdheuuuchjc
June 8th, 2012, 10:28 PM
I assume you clicked next and read the first chapter? (yes I know that it's small -.- )

I did:)
SinisterMystery
June 8th, 2012, 11:45 PM
Thank you :3
abdheuuuchjc
June 9th, 2012, 12:00 AM
Thank you :3

When u finish chapter two can u send me a link?
SinisterMystery
June 9th, 2012, 07:29 PM
When u finish chapter two can u send me a link?

Will do.
Might be a week or two though, I have heaps of school work to do.
StoneColdNicky
June 11th, 2012, 05:06 AM
Seems interesting so far, at least interesting to see where the next chapter will bring the introduction into it. Where is it set? At first I thought it was Australian, because it said 'Mum' and year twelve, but then it had a quarterback. Also, and it's a small thing, you said that the quarterback was twice Sophie's age, which seemed odd without any other explanation. But I'm looking forward to finding out what the unspeakable is! Keep it up!

I also really like that website. I never used it before. Is it easy? It could be a way to get into writing myself.
Incompris
June 11th, 2012, 05:22 AM
Very interesting, you must continue it and send us A link, very well written.
SinisterMystery
June 12th, 2012, 01:40 AM
Seems interesting so far, at least interesting to see where the next chapter will bring the introduction into it. Where is it set? At first I thought it was Australian, because it said 'Mum' and year twelve, but then it had a quarterback. Also, and it's a small thing, you said that the quarterback was twice Sophie's age, which seemed odd without any other explanation. But I'm looking forward to finding out what the unspeakable is! Keep it up!

I also really like that website. I never used it before. Is it easy? It could be a way to get into writing myself.

Ah >< I totally didn't notice that I'd written quarterback. *changes*
He's twice her age because he's been held back a year and she's been put forward into that class.
StoneColdNicky
June 14th, 2012, 08:18 PM
That makes him two years older, right?
SinisterMystery
June 14th, 2012, 09:29 PM
That makes him two years older, right?

Yes ^_^
wolfguy
June 14th, 2012, 10:20 PM
yes you should keep reading
NZLD
June 18th, 2012, 08:05 AM
Great intro, really got me hooked! if you like you could check my short story out just a couple above yours :P
StoneColdNicky
June 19th, 2012, 08:01 AM
I hope you didn't think I was being super critical. I actually did enjoy it.