Your best poem

[Thunderstorm]

Make the most meningful poem and post it. It can be already written or written just now, but it must be yours. Here's mine:

Summer, the warmth
the humid hot air
the weather that some can just not bear

the pool heats up as the sun rises high
the kids run around as the breeze blows by

the relazing, no worry time
the drop in school gang crime

Summer is gone
we knew it too well
it flew on by
we just couldn't tell

[Breakeven]

^ thats gooood :o like it :D

[Thunderstorm]

^ thats gooood :o like it :D

Thank you so much!

[Unknown-Data]

Live and forget,love and remember
Do not leave my soul behind, love me. Forever

Break my heart and shatter my soul
You know not, my forsaken goal

Can't you leave me
In harmony

Or must you kill
To pay the bill

My love is lost your heart is found
Just shut up and put me in the ground

You hated me, but I loved you
Take a day walking with my shoe

You live my life and feel my love
Then I'll kill you like a shattered dove.

Just 'cause I'm different you point your gun
My time sets like the afternoon sun.

[Tiggz]

Both of them are awesome!

[Unknown-Data]

Tyvm :D

[Bolt]

I stand above your demands
And answer with commands
I am willing to question your authority
And not bow like the majority

I dare to tear your hierarchy asunder
For the rewards are greater than the finest plunder
I will rebel against your cause with all my strength
And proceed to destroy it for whatever length

I shall rally every person
For if I don't the problem will only worsen
To fight the fight against your cause
For it is full of treacherous flaws
Eventually your tyranny shall end
And I shall be the reason that you descend

[deadpie]

dsfdsfdsfs

[idontknow153]

You hide, You run
You think that best for me
I scream and cry
But your are what's best for me
You claim to be dark
But i think your the light
So don't leave
I cry and scream
Your what's best for me.

[dontfiguremeout]

Nice poem. Hmm, over 60 poems I think the best one I wrote is this one.
Come Back With Me

Come back with me
one last time as we
go back to our childhood
days, enjoying ourselves

Come back with me
when we were innocent,
and all we knew that life
was a game of candy land

Come back with me
when we were young to
date, but our “date” was
hanging out at lunch

Come back with me
when I taught you how
to play volleyball and would
play for endless hours

Come back with me
when we would tell secrets
to each other that we
both loved each other

Come back with me
when we didn’t care if we
looked like fools in front of people;
we did it because we were together

Come back with me
to our old days, but
never come back;
stay innocent forever together

Come back with me
further than we met, so
I could show you the
fireflies in Ohio

Come back with me
to when I first tried
to fly a kite, but failed;
we would have laughed

Come back with me
and be kids forever
as we adventure through
the forests finding fairies

Come back with me
and not leave me please;
Don’t grow up, I miss
the old childhood days

[Thunderstorm]

Nice poem. Hmm, over 60 poems I think the best one I wrote is this one.
Come Back With Me

Come back with me
one last time as we
go back to our childhood
days, enjoying ourselves

Come back with me
when we were innocent,
and all we knew that life
was a game of candy land

Come back with me
when we were young to
date, but our “date” was
hanging out at lunch

Come back with me
when I taught you how
to play volleyball and would
play for endless hours

Come back with me
when we would tell secrets
to each other that we
both loved each other

Come back with me
when we didn’t care if we
looked like fools in front of people;
we did it because we were together

Come back with me
to our old days, but
never come back;
stay innocent forever together

Come back with me
further than we met, so
I could show you the
fireflies in Ohio

Come back with me
to when I first tried
to fly a kite, but failed;
we would have laughed

Come back with me
and be kids forever
as we adventure through
the forests finding fairies

Come back with me
and not leave me please;
Don’t grow up, I miss
the old childhood days

Amazing! This isn't my best poem up there though. check my blogs...One is a poem about life. check it out :yeah:

[Totality]

This is probably the best I've ever written,

Be Warned - Extremely Dark

What's Life

Blood was pouring out,
He saw the knife lying there,
Next to the dead body,
She was naked and bare,

Slit 6 times,
Across each wrist,
Straight to the bone,
A great twist,

Slit across the throat,
Talk about good measure,
Raped and killed,
What a sick pleasure,

He imagined a hooded figure,
Stood with a bone scythe,
He glanced down,
Bloody Hell, What's Life?

[Thunderstorm]

This is probably the best I've ever written,

Be Warned - Extremely Dark

What's Life

Blood was pouring out,
He saw the knife lying there,
Next to the dead body,
She was naked and bare,

Slit 6 times,
Across each wrist,
Straight to the bone,
A great twist,

Slit across the throat,
Talk about good measure,
Raped and killed,
What a sick pleasure,

He imagined a hooded figure,
Stood with a bone scythe,
He glanced down,
Bloody Hell, What's Life?

Haha, yup, that's life, Very...dynamic and open minded about society. Thank you for sharing!

[Ace_of_Spades]

Um.. I wrote this for my boyfriend when he was upset, so some of the meaning might be lost for you guys. Oh and his name means "Little Hawk," so that's what I call him (will make sense when you read the poem).


I stagger slowly without a will,

Upon a road, crossing many a hill.

Paved not of tar, but bones of the past,

The flesh upon them rot as they last.

The decay of my blight, upon which I stand,

Consistently coursing and my mind it does brand.

The sun is long gone, swallowed by baneful cloud,

The land they do cover, as a mephitic shroud.

And aphotic a fluid from foliage does flow,

If met with my skin, corruption will grow.

My skin, it will peel, and the tendons expose,

The blood it will drip, as red as a rose.

And so I must stay, in asylum of my path,

Though tortured I feel, in this eternal wrath.

*

For seventeen years this journey I make,

For seventeen years I feel I may break.

For seventeen years I do not know rest,

For seventeen years it has all been a test.

*

But come the day that my torture does end,

And find, I do, a miracle that God did send.

For on my path, this thing did defrock,

My misery, and this thing was a hawk.

So little, so fragile, so innocent there,

I needed to keep it, I needed to care.

But once on the hawk, my hand I did place,

A wound it did fester and began it to race.

Too fast did it spread through the angel I found,

Its innocence lost, and to suffer it was bound.

I did not know, and I did not see,

That my love would bring such harm upon thee.

*

Hawk, you are a Heaven in my Hell.

Hawk, for you my very soul I would sell.

Hawk, you saved me from a terrible fate,

Hawk, for you my entire life I will wait.

*

This hawk it was injured and I needed to save,

And so to its wound, my own skin I did clave.

I took a razor and cut into my limb,

And tore off my skin, the appearance was grim.

My arm it was mangled from my frantic incision,

The blade and my bone made a horrible collision.

My tendons tore as I ripped at my skin,

And from them, a string I did carefully spin.

My arm it was damaged and beyond repair,

And so with one left, this task I did dare.

I ignored my wound as the Hawk, I secured,

And bring him to health, I swiftly procured.

To his wound I did weave my skin with the thread,

And ensured that only one of us would be dead.

I worked through the days and he I did shield,

I labored until my Little Hawk was healed.

*

But now I am injured and he is not well,

For again we two must face a new Hell.

But now we will fight, not alone but as one,

And we will not stop until our pain is done.

For my love of my Hawk, and his love of me,

Will overcome all in our path that we see.

We will not rest, we will not give in,

We will not stop until both of us win.*

Together will be my Little Hawk and I,

Until, at once, the both of us die.

[dot6622]

That was awesome

[dot6622]

Why did you do this to me
you went of and made me believe
Only to take it away
throwing my heart away

U gave me hope in life
u gave me faith
Till one day you felt the need to take it away

Now as I sit here watching you with her
I find it hard that I ever trusted you with my heart
Because you took it and tore it apart

[Ace_of_Spades]

I like yours too c: It seems like love is always an inspiration, for better, or sadly for worse :/

[dot6622]

When I talk to him I feel different
when I think of him I feel warm
sometimes these feelings make me want to run out the door

All these mixed emotions
scare me to death
but you always seem to take my breath

I know I like you
its not just ur beauty
its ur heart that makes me feel the way I do



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