Red ~ just a short poem had a bad day

[razorbladesalvation]

red.

Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
The pain only makes me strong.
Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
I really thought you loved me but i couldn't be more wrong.

Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
Six inches dripping blood.
Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
I don't know why i feel this way it really isn't good.

Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
The pain has finally left me.
Red tear drops ran from the tip of the blade,
One day we will be together just like we used to be.

[xXoblivionXx]

I love it! So much meaning and emotion, I can definitely relate to this.

[razorbladesalvation]

thanks means alot x

[Electra Heart]

I like it, the repeating structure makes it very appealing to the ear. You can tell some emotion went into this. Great work :)

[CryWolf]

Yeah it captures emotion very well.

[razorbladesalvation]

thanks wolf means alot x