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Texas warrior
May 18th, 2012, 01:07 AM
I love a girl, I know will never love me back.
But I care not for when she is near the wind is at my back.

Well the world is shifting, and it's pulling us apart.
I know to her I can never say enough,
but time is running short, and there are things that need to be said.

She is standing here, but I can't say what needs to be said.
And when I try, she must fly, and all I can say is "why"?

All my hate and rage spill forth, the river overtakes the banks.
I have failed, I and so I am nailed to this vengeful cross of fate.

I feel lost in a wold of despair.
I know I will wander for the rest of my life, looking for a new love.
A love I will never find. And no one will care, in this world of despair.

On my cross I look out over the waistland that is my life,
and what do I see. The one I would like to call my wife.

I was given redemption by a merciful god and now I can say my peace.
"Cassie, even if I come to love another, I will always love you. You made me feel like a god."

The love of my life leaves me once again.
But I hurt not knowing I have said my peace.



Well how did I do, I know it's not great.

dot6622
June 3rd, 2012, 11:16 PM
Wow that's all I can say... this poem is really touching

Thunderstorm
June 4th, 2012, 04:59 PM
Deep man. that touched me. I feel the same way about a girl. It really sucks. It tears you apart. I'm glad I'm not the only one writing meningful poems these days.

dontfiguremeout
June 23rd, 2012, 11:12 AM
This is an awesome poem right here! It's filled with so much emotions! Good job!

Breakeven
June 23rd, 2012, 11:45 AM
this is really good :D