for a friend

[what the?]

I've just drawn this picture for my friend, and I wanted to share it with, get your opinion on it, before I give it to her.

here's the reference photo I used:
http://i16.tinypic.com/4zxqgjq.jpg

and here's the drawing:
http://i9.tinypic.com/4qs9aao.jpg

constructive criticism welcome :)

[Aηdy]

That is awesome Ash!!! I wish I could draw like that! I'm sure she'll love it! (If its for her!) but whoever it is for they will love it :P

[Serenity]

That's awesome! I, for one, would be THRILLED

[DouggyO.o]

good overall, the only flaw i see is that she has a large neck(hight wise)'


other then that brilliant.

[what the?]

the only flaw i see is that she has a large neck(hight wise)'



Lol, yeah, I sorta noticed that, but I'd pretty much finished by then, I couldn't be arsed to change it.

I could always rub out the shoulders completely and just have a head. It definitely has a more cartoon feel to it though, compared to my other drawings and I quite like that, so I might leave it in as a bit of a quirk. It was never going to look 100% realistic anyway.

Thanks guys :)

[Crazysam]

Wow your obviously really talented! :D
however for some constructive critism I think you have drawn your neck a bit long?

[underoath12192]

Heck of a lot better than I can draw! that's really good!