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Breakeven
May 7th, 2012, 03:17 PM
i felt like sharing something :p so here u go

keep on going
keep on trying
it gets better without crying
and gets lonely sometimes and hard to breath they call it love and pain
i call it what i feel
and for those night when your just alone
you will remember me waiting on your front door
and your scars don't lie but if you let me heal the pain
i promise you it wont hurt the same
you wont be alone you will have some love to heal your broken soul
and every memory would be gone if close your eyes and put your headphones on

Stronger
May 7th, 2012, 03:23 PM
Love it. :O

Don'tDisstheSonic
May 7th, 2012, 03:30 PM
Love it viv! <3

Sordid Saint
May 10th, 2012, 06:11 PM
wow this is good, lots of feeling :) i love it

Erasmus
May 10th, 2012, 06:16 PM
Really good!

good.vs.evil
May 10th, 2012, 06:33 PM
have you heard of deliric.com?? its a poetry website. your good. you might like this site

Smeagol
May 11th, 2012, 06:00 AM
This is a really good poem