I Hate the Way...

[xXoblivionXx]

I hate the way I look
I hate the way I walk
I hate the way I laugh
I hate the way I talk

I hate the way I think
I hate the way I cry
I hate the way I live
I hate the way I try

I hate the way I feel
I hate the way I see
I hate the way I judge
I hate the way I believe

But most of all, I hate the way you look at me
Through your luscious green eyes you can not see
You made me feel that you care
It’s sad to say I can no longer bare

You built me up only to tear me down
You have no soul, you make me frown
Now I am once again alone in the dark
I thought you were my light, instead you were just a spark

I will never give someone my heart
If I do they will take advantage of me
I can’t take that chance it will tear me apart
I just want to be free

[KarkatLuv]

:'(
so meaningfull!

[Jupiter]

i'm literally in tears. ;-;

[Genghis Khan]

Wow.

[xXoblivionXx]

Thanks guys... I need to get my emotions out and this is what I end up with.

[Noxail]

The rhyme sceme at the beginning is ah-ma-zing. I love this poem so much. Made me tear up, and that's hard. Beautiful piece. :wub:

[Perfectly Flawed]

This is really good.

[KewlKat]

Out of all.... This is just.... wow, I can only say wow :)

[xXoblivionXx]

thanks guys!

[Texas warrior]

It's good, but it's not great. I didn't like the flow of it.

[Roses_Are_Yellow]

Iwa t to cry :,( but on the bright side, it was good! :)

[dot6622]

I loved it. It shows a lot of feeling and just all the words fall together perfectly like a puzzle.