Then the sky fell

[Weeping_Angel]

This is probably one of the worst things I have every written, but whatever. Please comment.


Darkness crept into the sunlit room
While shadows took over the world, although the sun was hiding behind clouds
Rain pelted the dry pavement
And the sun had not come out yet
Wind blew on the still trees
But the sun stayed in hiding
It never came out
Then the sky fell

[JackShephard]

I like it. Though I'm not entirely sure of what you are trying to convey. What message are you telling us?

[Weeping_Angel]

I like it. Though I'm not entirely sure of what you are trying to convey. What message are you telling us?

The poem is basically about how life goes on, but if you are too afraid to come out and say what you want to say, and actually become 'something' then you will live life, and hen it willbe over. No in between stuff.

[Texas warrior]

It's actualy pritty good.

[Weeping_Angel]

It's actualy pritty good.

Thanks dude :P