VanillaSweety
April 22nd, 2012, 05:05 AM
Heres just a little bit of a story im attempting to write, heh.. What do you think of it? Is it worth continuing? Enjoy!
She was in a small dark room. The only light source was from a narrow shaft in the left corner. It cast gray dim light. He stood in the middle of the room. His face was stained with red as he stood before the innocent child whose body was limp, drained of blood. She looked around desperately, hoping to find a door, a window, anything that could help her escape. He slowly turned his gaze towards her…
Lea woke with a start. Everything was foggy. She looked around frantically, and let out a sigh as she recognized the familiar surroundings. She was in her room, her magenta silk curtains shading the room from the sunlight outside. It was daytime, noon by the looks of it.
“How long have I slept?” Lea mumbled to herself.
“Oh, great, you’re awake! I was so worried about you!” Lea sighed with relief as she recognized Andrew’s voice.
“What happened?” Lea asked, whispering to herself. She looked up and saw Andrew staring at her. His eyes were affectionate and caring. She noticed dark circles under his eyes. She hated it when he didn’t get enough sleep because of her. These nightmares had been going on for months now, and nothing had happened. Why did he always have to worry so much?
Andrew saw her frowning at him and sighed, “I’ll never stop worrying about you Lea” He kissed her gently on her forehead.
IT IS NOT CLOSE TO BEING FINISHED.. this was just a little short bit of it. (If anyone would like to help, you can give me ideas on how to continue it. :)
Love y'alls <3
She was in a small dark room. The only light source was from a narrow shaft in the left corner. It cast gray dim light. He stood in the middle of the room. His face was stained with red as he stood before the innocent child whose body was limp, drained of blood. She looked around desperately, hoping to find a door, a window, anything that could help her escape. He slowly turned his gaze towards her…
Lea woke with a start. Everything was foggy. She looked around frantically, and let out a sigh as she recognized the familiar surroundings. She was in her room, her magenta silk curtains shading the room from the sunlight outside. It was daytime, noon by the looks of it.
“How long have I slept?” Lea mumbled to herself.
“Oh, great, you’re awake! I was so worried about you!” Lea sighed with relief as she recognized Andrew’s voice.
“What happened?” Lea asked, whispering to herself. She looked up and saw Andrew staring at her. His eyes were affectionate and caring. She noticed dark circles under his eyes. She hated it when he didn’t get enough sleep because of her. These nightmares had been going on for months now, and nothing had happened. Why did he always have to worry so much?
Andrew saw her frowning at him and sighed, “I’ll never stop worrying about you Lea” He kissed her gently on her forehead.
IT IS NOT CLOSE TO BEING FINISHED.. this was just a little short bit of it. (If anyone would like to help, you can give me ideas on how to continue it. :)
Love y'alls <3