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LandDownUnder_05
June 16th, 2005, 03:08 PM
Black as coal
it never ends
the time is right
it's back again

Cold to touch
easy to use
it's every look
is taunting you

It does no harm
not on it's own
it takes someone
lost and alone

Closer now
than before
it sits with me
beside my door

whispers soft
inside my ear
it's easy now
just have no fear

one body part
decides my fate
do i pull it now?
or longer wait

this question constant
on my mind
as i stare down the barrell
of a 45

i used to have so many poems, like a whole notebook full, front and back, then i put them all on my computer and threw the notebook away, because i didn't want anyone to read them, unfortunately my computere crashed, and two years of poetry...down the drain..

Anonymous
June 16th, 2005, 08:39 PM
that one was great!!! :hug:

Whisper
June 16th, 2005, 09:01 PM
Wow!!! Thats beautiful!
I agree with Sarah you are a wonderful poet!!!


I'm so sorry that you lost all of those poems, if you think bout it there not really gone, yes you no longer have them on paper or in a file, instead you carry them inside of you where you know there safe.
But I'm sure they were as beautiful and elegant as "45"
You have a gift

Oath
June 24th, 2005, 10:26 PM
That was great.

Yea i saved like 4 months of poetry so like over 50 poems on tons of floppy disks and i cant find them anywhere ive been looking for days. It suck.

My poems:
Death dream
feelings poem

kolte
June 25th, 2005, 11:49 AM
I write mainly books, some pomes, songs. Ive had my share of losses. I was trying to make a new user file on my computer. So I was duplicating files and sending them over to the other user name as shared files....must I say more. I lost almost all my work. I Hated myself for it. I morned for hours at the loss of my creations; searched for hours on the computer for were My life had sliped to. Only to fail with one pitiful conclusion. THE COMPUTER IS EVIL. T.T

Oath
June 25th, 2005, 06:40 PM
Yea. If i make up a poem or something i usually write in a book now.

LandDownUnder_05
June 26th, 2005, 03:19 AM
Thanks Guys! :)

jakethesweetsk8ter
June 27th, 2005, 11:44 AM
that was great brit :)

DouggyO.o
June 29th, 2005, 02:27 PM
tHAT WAS KICK ASS!

Whisper
July 13th, 2005, 10:17 AM
I like this one allot sooo......*bump*