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abdheuuuchjc
April 15th, 2012, 04:31 PM
Hey i wrote the lyrics for this song. Are they good, be honest?

That violence i do not yield
It wasnt me it was Caulfield

You say he was killed with a knife
It was because of slaughterhouse 5

Vonagut, Kesey, Salinger
All the killer's malinger

We are infected
At us this is directed

Toxic media
They changed the encyclopedia
This isnt what we need
But it's causing the feed
Just because of their greed

The combine is making us do it
Now my brain is a bit
This isnt for us to get
Dont throw a fit

Watch out big brother is watching
Our life's they are botching
On the controls they are notching

(Repeat chorus twice)
Its ALL toxic!!!

Phazit
April 16th, 2012, 12:14 PM
I like it! :)

Breakeven
April 16th, 2012, 02:55 PM
i like it , ur goooood :D

abdheuuuchjc
April 16th, 2012, 10:48 PM
Thanks its my bands first single