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Wintergirl_80.0
April 12th, 2012, 08:52 PM
she Used sit at home
wanin to be all alone
an wast away till you can see her bones
cuz she watch the tv
an read the magazines
an she wants to be
like all the girls she seen
an her thoughtsare wack
she thinks shes fat
but can see every lil bone in her back
an her her cheeks are hollowin
and she vomitin
everything she is swallowin
all these stupid diets shes followin
an shes wollowin
in selfhatred
actin like skinny is sacred
She dont see her like we do
all the beauty that shine through
she needs to be shown the truth
but if she stops she feels she'll loose
so she refuses food
she barley eats
an when she do
all she does is puke
an she cuts her wrist
you could form a fist
round her tiny arms
but shes terrified of carbs
an she watches her calories
an shes in so deep
shes hard to reach
she cant sleep
lord i think its time you intervened
cuz she wont listen to me
an too soon
itll be too late
God please dont let this be her fate
Lord I would hate
to loose her to somethin so fake
to see her stolen away
by
all these vicious lies
shes too young to die
she dont have the strength to try
the strength to fight
she is only fifteen
such a young age
believe it or not shes clean
from drugs but shes a slave
to the voices that scream
in her head
an she says
she cant be saved
Lord Show her the way
ease her pain
dont let this desease claim
her glorious life
or that pretty soul that resides
lost inside
her messed up mind
Lord calm the storm
Like only you can
with the power and love
of the fathers hand
look at the scars coverin her skin
show her theses will never help her win
she's beautiful
but she dont know
even though
time and time shes been told
if she keeps this up she'll bea beautiful
pile of bones
buried six feet below
an our tears will flow
cuz she is so gorgous
shes nearly perfect
but she dont beleive it
she turns away from us
she has no trust
and it really makes me
so sad to see
someone whos heart glows
go
down this dark road
an God I know it hurts you too
cuz shes turn her back on you
but please
you gotta help her through
an help her see the truth
let her know
shes beautiful
an she dont need to be thin
for us to see the beauty with in.

dot6622
June 24th, 2012, 04:38 AM
Amaxing

PyChE36
June 25th, 2012, 12:55 PM
uuuuhhh, there;s my moth... amazing.

Breakeven
June 25th, 2012, 01:00 PM
wooooooooow this amazing ,i would want to hear it as a song
you are good , keep writing <3

xXoblivionXx
June 25th, 2012, 03:17 PM
that was really good :D

Wintergirl_80.0
June 26th, 2012, 09:18 AM
thanks its on you tube look up beauty with in by mikamongoose

Breakeven
June 26th, 2012, 11:56 AM
thanks its on you tube look up beauty with in by mikamongoose

i did , i loved it and u are very pretty :wub:

Wintergirl_80.0
June 26th, 2012, 02:31 PM
awwwwwwwww thanks soooooo much but im not all that great as the rap says i think im fat

Breakeven
June 26th, 2012, 06:53 PM
awwwwwwwww thanks soooooo much but im not all that great as the rap says i think im fat

awww u are not :)

Wintergirl_80.0
June 26th, 2012, 10:05 PM
i am trust me i cant look in a mirror with out being discusted

thegirlishere
June 27th, 2012, 12:10 AM
thats really good

heres a little thing i made up
Bulletproof heart
I Used Fall Hard When I'd See You Suddenly Smile.
Now I Know The Reason, Its Just Murdering Me Inside.
I Thought I Knew You So Bloody Well.
Now I've Faced Reality, I Cant Not Give A Shit.
So Now Im Choking On Your Name Boy. I Hope You Feel My Pain.
Feeling For You So Boy, While The Tears Start To Rain.
Drowning In The Flood Of Memories That Lie.
Now Just Grab The Damn Gun, Shooting Till I Die.
You Were My Fucking Everything.
The Reason I Still Bothered To Try To Make It Through Another Day.
I would Feel So Alive Looking In Your Deep Brown Eyes.
You Would Always Hold My Hand And Catch Me When I'd Fall.
And Now Here You Are Pushing Me Up Against The Walls.
You Played Me All Night Long, Said You Wanted Me.
But You Always Wanted That Other Bitch.
But Deep Inside You Know I Know Someday My Guy Really Will Be Here
But For The Moment
I'm Choking On Your Name Boy. I Hope You Feel My Pain.
Feeling For You So Boy, While The Tears Start To Rain.
Drowning In The Flood Of Memories That Lie.
Now Just Grab The Damn Gun, Shooting Till I Die.
I Thought I Loved You With All I Had.
You Were The Candle To My Dark, Then She Went And Blew You Out
So I Guess Its Time To Dance In The Dark
Cause I No Longer
Am Choking On Your Name Boy. Feeling Any Pain.
No More Feeling For You Boy, Cause He's Wiped My Tears Away.
Escaping All The Memories That Were Burning Me Like An Art.
I Guess Now You Know This For Sure.
I Have A Bullet Proof Heart.

Wintergirl_80.0
June 27th, 2012, 12:35 PM
its great