Rap I Wrote: Man

[Gothicdeer]

I really don't like it that much but I'll post it anyway

I woke up mid day
In my makeshift bed I lay
I started txtin this lass
That I've liked since my first highschool class
"Today's my b day and I havent got a plan"
She replied with a pic and a smile
"Almost a man"
Man
Man
Man
I get tired of my dad
The way he messes with my head
Is like deciding what color Is plaid
But he made sense when we was on
The subject of wether I keep band
"Making the decision yourself makes you a man"
Man
Man
Man
My old friend loves to get high
After a smok3 on the floor he would lie
It almost looks like he's about to die
He started doing weed
And acted like he was doing a good deed
Then he offered me some pcp
I said "a druggy is not what I want to be
And you slammed to where you can't play kick the can
Does not make you a bigger man"
Man
Man
Man

[Can'tHelpIt]

good message but if you changed some stuff it could be poetry

[Joey was here...]

the line "The way he messes with my head
Is like deciding what color Is plaid" is quite a good line,
but "Plaid" doesn't quite rhyme with Head..