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Yehudis13
April 8th, 2012, 07:17 PM
Even when life is horrible, I always make sure to write. It makes me a small bit happier



A tyrant
A boy
A whip
Me. Watching
Cracks, echoing
Slaps, silent screams
Me. Staring
A harsh voice
Shuffled footsteps
Silent grunting
Me. Crying
More cracks
More slaps
More silent screaming
Me. Dying

Dragon_Droppings
April 8th, 2012, 07:21 PM
I love this poem. Nuff said

Erasmus
April 8th, 2012, 08:08 PM
Wow, that's really touching and pretty!

DragonAngel
April 8th, 2012, 08:24 PM
I love the poem

Yehudis13
April 8th, 2012, 08:28 PM
Wow, that's really touching and pretty!

I love the poem

I love this poem. Nuff said

Thanks guys it means a lot.