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Roses_Are_Yellow
April 2nd, 2012, 05:59 PM
To the people around me
I'm young and immature
I'm happy and giggly
I'm nothing but pure

I laugh all the time
I do nothing but smile
They say I'm random
some say I'm in denile

The mask comes off
When I'm alone
I'm serious and dark
I'm as cold as stone

I keep my heart protected
behind a thick wall
I don't need a Prince Charming
I'll catch my self when I fall

It's hard to trust others
When so many have caused me pain
Have stabbed me in the back
It's amazing that I'm still sane

I question myself
I'm so insecure
I'll never be good enough
This is true I'm sure

My parents say I don't try
But I have, I've given my all
But now I'm too tired
and all they see is my fall

My mind is a trainwreck
With emotions the fly
All these thoughts and memories
Make me want to cry

But I carry on
and act all immature
If people really knew me
Would they still think I'm pure?

Jess
April 3rd, 2012, 10:45 PM
this is a beautiful poem <3

Mirage
April 4th, 2012, 12:12 AM
this is a beautiful poem <3

This.

Honestly, the quality of the stuff that goes up to this "open book" is astonishing.

double r
April 4th, 2012, 12:33 AM
Well done, good written poem

Roses_Are_Yellow
May 17th, 2012, 08:16 PM
Thanks :)

This.

Honestly, the quality of the stuff that goes up to this "open book" is astonishing.


Is that good..or bad? lol...

Texas warrior
May 18th, 2012, 12:04 AM
That's really good, but a little long.

Roses_Are_Yellow
May 18th, 2012, 12:43 AM
Thanks, and yeah, this was one of my "ramble" poems..lol.

Breakeven
May 18th, 2012, 07:44 AM
I LOVE IT <3
my fav part of it "I don't need a Prince Charming I'll catch my self when I fall"