Voices (the___ repesent spaces)

[Wintergirl_80.0]

This is so______________you are so
__________STUPID_________
its_____________________your
___________WORTHLESS______
You know it_____________you know you
___________WONT___________
work. You need to_________ever be good enough. Just
______________STOP_____________________
its dangerous. Your so____________trying. Your a
__________________LOST_________
in this_______________________cause. Your
_____________UGLY__________
world. The_______________and everyone knows your
_________________USELESS_________
That bring you ____________you only let them
_____________DOWN_________
are only cruel____________you tell them
_____________LIES__________
I hope one day you________ I can
___________SEE_____________
that you dont have to wear a____ Through your little
_________________MASK_________
and relize your true_________and there is no
_____________BEAUTY____________

[embers]

It's good the you attempted a different structure but in my opinion that hasn't worked and each line as come out jumbled, making the overall thing incoherent.

[Wintergirl_80.0]

i looks better when it is written on paper the capitalized word goes with each unfinished statment

[embers]

If you like playing around with typography, you should check out poems by E E Cummings, he was really good with that kind of stuff

[Wintergirl_80.0]

i might i just started experimenting with it