im torn: please respond to this one!!!

[Anonymous]

laying there on the ground,
to silent to hear.
breathing the once rich air,
through his lungs.
In excruciating pain.

You have me until the last blood vessel breaks.
then i will have killed you.
All the whirling emotions you have caused.
All the sadness involved.
Your killing my sanity!
You are making me be you.
I am which ever way the wind blows.
I am a free spirit.
I'm evil hearted, im disgusted by your evocitive ways.
I can not control myself you are pulling me under your wrath.
Just let me bleed here.
Im no good use to you.
Im not exactly living anymore.
You are a murderer!

[Anonymous]

why does no one ever tell me what my writng is??

[Anonymous]

you is really me in disguise

[Blackness_chic]

wow! thats intense, i like it

[Anonymous]

thanx! :smile:

[Peanut Butter]

i though it was powerful and when i read it it reminded me of a battle that's going on inside while the weaker good side dies and the murderer stands above with an evil bloodstained joy upon his face

Sounds to me like Good Vs. Evil.

But evil won! :shock:

[Oath]

It was really good i liked it..you should continue writing ur really good at it...good luck