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ReasonsForWeeping
March 17th, 2012, 10:48 PM
Who are you?
What do you look like?
Where are you daddy?
Do you know about me daddy?
Do you hate me daddy?
Do you love me daddy?
Do you know about momma,daddy?
I wish i knew you daddy.
I wish i could see you just once.
I wish i could hear you're voice just once.
I wish you would talk to me daddy.
I Wish i could hug you daddy.
Could you ever love me daddy?
Daddy Do you think I'm broken?
Is that why you don't love me daddy?
Am i that unlovable daddy?
Iris
March 17th, 2012, 11:25 PM
Your words broke my heart. They were so...sweet and innocent and yet so pain-filled. Really powerful. <3
Electra Heart
March 17th, 2012, 11:52 PM
That was really sweet... but I feel like some n00b will reply to this like a survey... NOT insulting you, I'm insulting them. This poem was amazing...
Dragon_Droppings
March 17th, 2012, 11:57 PM
That was really sweet... but I feel like some n00b will reply to this like a survey...
Great idea
Who are you? Sam
What do you look like? I have hair and a body
Where are you daddy? In my bed
Do you know about me daddy? Nope, sorry
Do you hate me daddy? Sure......
Do you love me daddy? Actually I love you
Do you know about momma,daddy? Yes. She is in bed with me
I wish i knew you daddy. I wish I knew you too
I wish i could see you just once. Wow. We wish lots of the same things
I wish i could hear you're voice just once. Send me a recording. K?
I wish you would talk to me daddy. I will, give me your number
I Wish i could hug you daddy. So do I.., so do I...
Could you ever love me daddy? Of course
Daddy Do you think I'm broken? No
Is that why you don't love me daddy? I do love you
Am i that unlovable daddy?nononomo
But in all seriousness this was a great poem.
Wonton
March 18th, 2012, 12:27 AM
I think this is a good poem....I don't know if you took this from your own personal life, but I just wanted to say how much better artwork and literature can be when taken from real life situations.
Jupiter
March 18th, 2012, 01:00 AM
i dont care what anyone says. this is a great poem. it really is.
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