Day at the park....

[Cognizant]

....featuring my Friend since Kindergarten, Annie!
I chose 6 of the best ones I took. Comments are welcome, and in fact, loved! :)

http://i.imgur.com/T3cxQ.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/MV9K8.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/qRU6T.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/HMajS.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/6HKUO.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/9je8w.jpg

Well, that's it! Thanks for viewing :D

[Elijah329]

Looks pretty good. Some things I did notice however is that you might want to try to use the rule of thirds a little bit more. Do you do any post-op editing?

[Cognizant]

Not anymore. I can' afford Photoshop or anything.
As far as the rule of thirds go, I think 90% of them are in the second third.

[WickedWeekend]

(I can just imagine your avatar following her around, taking pictures.)

Very good! I like.

[Erasmus]

wow, that's really good. and annie's really pretty!

[Cognizant]

wow, that's really good. and annie's really pretty!
I'll be sure to tell her that :D

[unknownuser]

I think they look really nice (and Annie is very pretty). :)

I do agree with Elijah that for some, the composition is a bit... odd. For the first one, I REALLY like the composition- even though there's lots of angles and lines, they fit together perfectly. I think 2 would be better if her bottom hand weren't cut off. 3 doesn't really work for me... the sun is too harsh and I don't think framing her in the middle was the best thing to do in this case. 4 I like, if anything, I'd suggest having both hands showing. 5 is framed interestingly. For 6, I like the angle you photographed her at and how you framed it, if anything, I would have used rule of thirds and had her toward the right.

Just my 2 cents. Looks really promising, nice job!