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Wintergirl_80.0
March 5th, 2012, 07:29 PM
She is talking
But I dont know what she said
Only one thought is running through my head
There is one place that I want to be
One thing that I want to have with me
The thought of shining metal keeps me calm
Because I know that it wont be long
Until I get my sweet release
My one blissful moment of unhindered peace
The blade will bite into my skin
The bloody high will begin
Then a smile will play at my lips
As red beads form on my hips
I'll drag it diagonally across my side
Across my hand and my upper thigh
Finnally I will almost feel
I'll almost remeber what its like to be real
To not be so numb and dead inside
I'll almost feel like I am alive
For a moment I won't be an empty shell
Who's soul has died and gone to Hell
For a moment I will feel this
The stinging edge of a razor's kiss

Smeagol
March 7th, 2012, 04:42 PM
That's very interesting. It was well written and it seems like it comes from experience? I hope to see more of your work :)

Desuetude
March 7th, 2012, 04:56 PM
This is amazing, I had to stop my music to read it and thats saying something :P
Please keep writing, I do love your poems.

Wintergirl_80.0
March 7th, 2012, 05:26 PM
I will thank you soo much it is from experince i wrote it the day before i went back to the hospital for cutting and suicide attempt