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painful paradice
February 25th, 2012, 06:51 PM
She looked nothing like she would in the real world. She was in a dress that felt too good to be in her human price range. It was a black rose colored dress that ended just past her shoulder blades and just before her knees. The top part, about from her waste up, was all one design of a semitransparent black fabric with an opaque black floral design over top of that. The material lasted to her shoulders and then over the sides a little bit, at least past her armpits. She wore two long black sleeves that were not part of the dress. They were made of a similar design to the top of the dress.
The lower half of the dress was cut off by a black strapped belt. The one end of it was a large circle that the other end looped through. The bottom part of the dress was a multilayer design with each layer inward more comfortable and a bit longer than the last. The top layer ended on the further most part around her lower thighs. The lowest part of the dress ended around the top of her calves. Each layer over top of the other had a new design on it that poked out from the bottom of the layer above it. Her long white legs were thin and perfect. Her feet were small and fit fine into a small pair of size five black heels. She was as skinny as any model.
Her long chestnut brown hair was the perfect thing to frame her face. It sat just over top of her ears before dipping back behind them and coming out and meeting at the center of her throat. She had the brightest nicest blue eyes anyone had ever seen. They sparkled like the light of the sky in early morning after the moon had set and when the sun was just barely getting over the horizon line. Her nose was small and elegant, her mouth was the perfect size and shape to fit on her regular sized head, her ears were small and had just enough room for every piercing they had in them—a small skull in the left and a rose in the right, both made out of black studs—her skin was the perfect color of pale that it made everything else on her a great contrast. Her chest was the perfect size to fit the dress, not too big yet not too small, then it went in to her thin stomach with a size two and a half inch line.