I need critiques o.o

[Antagonist]

Can you guys critique this? Thanks :)

Vivid

You are vivid in my dreams,
Like a post traumatic stress nightmare.
Terrorize,
Cut in your soul with raven's eyes,
Watching you like death.

I feel nothing,
I am numb.
Except for the fear that I posses,
When you pull out your gun,

And shoot me with your
Death,
Darkness,
And despair.

For tonight is my last,
I fear my past,
Will be bombed into shambles,
And be fogotten,
Like the Greek.