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forever.sleep
June 8th, 2007, 07:31 PM
Innocence stolen
a trust to soon betrayed
knowing you could do something
but being to afraid

you hear his footsteps in the hallway
you see his shadow at the door
you close your eyes and roll over
as you tell yourself
you wont let him do this anymore

now hes breathing heavy
you know its almost done
he gets up to leave
and you feel the need to run

i wrote this i couple of months ago. it was the result of trying to remember.

MoveAlong
June 8th, 2007, 07:41 PM
I think it's a good poem. =)
Rape and abuse are crimes and I see it as something that plagues our world. I'm sorry for all the needless victims out there.

Ironic Infidel In England
June 9th, 2007, 02:45 AM
That is a very good poem. Very.. emotive.

Whisper
June 9th, 2007, 02:53 PM
Aww sweetie I'm sorry
I've been through some horrible times aswell
a demon named Zack
Your not alone k




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