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curryjacket
January 30th, 2012, 05:22 PM
At least I'm not special.
At least you're not mine.
You're incapable of telling the truth,
so why even try?

At least you've got style.
You know every soothing phrase by heart.
And at the most I am just pretentious.
But I hate grasping straws from afar.

Heart, oh my,
Don't fail me now.
Don't leave me hanging, with one more chance.
Attack me, it's what you were born to do.

(At least I'm pessimistic.
I can't do my best.)
At least you can't stop me.
From taking up the lead.
In this precious tin-can car you bought me.
At least you cannot stop me.
Because you're not special (either).
I've silenced for a while, but it's all I can do.
It's all I can do to you.
I've silenced all I can.
I've shut the shadows down.
I'm locking doors,
watch out! (Hurricane).

Heart, oh my,
Don't fail me now.
Don't leave me hanging, with one more chance.
Attack me. I'm not special.

Scarface
February 3rd, 2012, 03:01 PM
thats not too bad man, i like the aggression that you put into it. Even though it was kinda sad that the character that seems to be talking in 1st person is getting put down an awful lot. I can correlate. Nice work.