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Consumemysoul
January 15th, 2012, 06:11 PM
For we are clay in the giant's hands, he is not god but a creator. He forms us and sets us free, we do not steal his traits for he develops ours newly each being. From man's nimble limbs, to his pulsing heart we are crafted; yet for what purpose? Through out multiple encounters with tempting fate we begin to pick apart and understand our driving force, does the giant's breath give us a soul? We ponder that all are born with a soul, why is it not something of which must be attained? We all feel that without a soul we will not carry on into the next world, which can be a positive or a negative; so if the soul is not created from good, it can not be destroyed by evil. If it's something simply sitting inside us, what is the first move which taints our purity?

Spook
January 20th, 2012, 02:16 PM
This is really good- sounds like something I would've written. Though this type of writing isn't the most popular, I just really love it. :) Good job.