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forever_alone
August 8th, 2004, 03:11 PM
Her expression has faded,away from all sight.
It is stuck deep inside her and now unwilling to fight.
Not wanting to be here, only wanting to be gone.
Trying to escape from this life, gone so wrong.
She walks, crawls, drags herself alone
Trying to find freedom but this life is so long.
No escape, for they will perceive,
No suicide or way to leave.
Cannot disappear or just fly away;
No ounce of hope for here she must stay.
She wanders alone, going round and round.
She bleeds every minute,but never makes a sound.
Led every minute by these invisible strings,
As if a puppet, she's draged away from these things.
Tried to spread her wings,jump and take flight
But now is bound to the darkness, unable to fight.


I wrote that when i was 12............aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
lol!!!!
I still feel this way.

Casfetes
August 8th, 2004, 04:36 PM
you never gave us the "abso-freakin-lutely not"

Whisper
August 9th, 2004, 03:09 AM
Kinda, but I'm a guy not a girl so I can't vote.

forever_alone
August 9th, 2004, 11:55 AM
ooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkk
counts 4 guys 2....

Pit Lord
August 10th, 2004, 02:07 AM
wow, cant belive it. it brings a tear 2 my eye :cry: . i like your poem, very nice. youve made the pit lord cry.

forever_alone
August 10th, 2004, 05:29 AM
hey thankx :)

forever_alone
August 10th, 2004, 05:30 AM
hey thankx :)

Anonymous
August 16th, 2004, 09:24 AM
I like how the words fit easily together, and even rhyme... Sounds like you put a lot of work into this :) I like it