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Professional Russian
January 12th, 2012, 05:30 PM
I'm not one of the people that make poems all the tim but this was a school assignment so tell how it is:


Robert Bolander
1/12/12
Period 7/8
M*A*S*H 4077th


From the moment I saw it
The most amazing thing
It was so funny
I’ve known it forever


It was for me
From Radar to Hawkeye
It was funny in every way
Sadly some couldn’t be saved



From the homemade gin to the imported whiskey
They loved it all
I love it so much
I’m tring to get every episode



The movie is good
But the show it better
From Col. Blake to Col. Potter
And everyone in between
Now everyones got there favorite show
But this one is mine
Harry Morgan will bemissed
Franks passing will make hawkeye pissed



From Corpral to Colonel
From Radar to col. Potter
I will remember them all
It will be a sad day when they are all gone


R.I.P Col. Potter, Col. Blake, and Maj. Frank Burns

Spook
January 20th, 2012, 02:19 PM
I like your rhyme scheme and I feel a sense of significance as to the meaning- could you explain so we could read it in a better depth? Good work, besides. :)

Professional Russian
January 29th, 2012, 11:26 AM
I like your rhyme scheme and I feel a sense of significance as to the meaning- could you explain so we could read it in a better depth? Good work, besides. :)

Its an elegy poem about my favorite show

Jupiter
January 29th, 2012, 01:14 PM
My grandma actually watched that show. I showed this to her... she was impressed.

Professional Russian
January 29th, 2012, 04:22 PM
My grandma actually watched that show. I showed this to her... she was impressed.

hahaha thanks