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Roses_Are_Yellow
January 9th, 2012, 11:57 PM
Dread fills your veins
You breathe in deep
Right foot followed by left
Resisting the urge to weep
You see the looks
The fake smiles
Are they really your friends?
Or is it all lies?
When your back is turned
Do they laugh at you
Mock you
Probably gossip too
So you quicken your pace
Ignore the questioning looks
Keep your head down
Hold on tight to your books
Just keep walking
Keep the smile plastered
The mask of happiness
You've clearly mastered

Desuetude
January 10th, 2012, 04:45 PM
God thats amazing, tbh I don't often say that about poems. The words capture exactly how I feel, i just can't get over how good it is!!! :)

Roses_Are_Yellow
January 10th, 2012, 07:24 PM
Thankyou :) Seriously, you just made my day :)

And I know how you feel :) the worlds filled with fakers these days...if you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to PM me.

Desuetude
January 15th, 2012, 12:29 AM
yeah i know they suck but we'll get though it :)

and just 1 post away from being able to PM lol

sieg
January 15th, 2012, 01:47 AM
very very nice. It had a nice pace and rhyme scheme to it, I'd love to hear more from you.

shatter..
January 18th, 2012, 07:38 PM
Lovely poem, to me I see it has someone whom is distressed. Trying to find others like him/her self.

Roses_Are_Yellow
January 20th, 2012, 01:58 AM
yeah i know they suck but we'll get though it :)

and just 1 post away from being able to PM lol

We will :) Compared to last year, this is the mildest feeling I've had on this subject in what feels like forever...

very very nice. It had a nice pace and rhyme scheme to it, I'd love to hear more from you.

Thankyou! :) My class is writing poetry this month, maybe I'll post some of them up on VT. :)

Lovely poem, to me I see it has someone whom is distressed. Trying to find others like him/her self.

That's sort of how I felt when I wrote this poem, and thankyou. :)

Desuetude
January 20th, 2012, 12:03 PM
We will :) Compared to last year, this is the mildest feeling I've had on this subject in what feels like forever...

I'm so glad things are getting better for you :) wish i could say the same for me but oh well

Roses_Are_Yellow
January 20th, 2012, 01:52 PM
Thanks. And I'm sorry :( Things will get better eventually :) Just until then, focus on the positives! :)

Spook
January 20th, 2012, 02:15 PM
Great work. I really really like it and totally relate :)