Critique The Person's Photo Above You

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[Iris]

I think this is a great idea :).



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I love love love the perspective. It's so fluid and beautiful; it fascinates me. I really enjoy the concept of it-very powerful. I like that the colors are grey but the lighting is so perfect that it doesn't feel bland. It also has a kind of rhythm in the pattern that's really enticing. The only minor criticism I have is that, while the perspective is really great, I think if your camera was lower, and you got a personal shot of a few chairs and from there the eye moved to the thousands lying beyond, it would add more depth to the photo. Other than that though, really great job :).


My photo: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/330/b/2/the_queen_by_foreverlilly-d4hez8h.jpg

[unknownuser]

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[User Deleted]

I like it though I would like to see a bit more of the flappy thingy. Like twist it a little to the left.

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[Ambrosia]

That landscape is gorgeous, I question where it's at! With the lamp post, if it was a bit darker, it would add an air of mystery to it!
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[User Deleted]

This is opinion, but I don't care for the cut branches (or are those just dead?) Also, the bit of open on the box I think would look better closed more.

That landscape is gorgeous, I question where it's at! With the lamp post, if it was a bit darker, it would add an air of mystery to it!
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It is in alaska XD

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[unknownuser]

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[jbs1125]

That's cool! Id really love it if there was some action in the background

[unknownuser]

That's cool! Id really love it if there was some action in the background

Adorable fox in a great pose! It would be perfect if the picture was larger (I'm assuming it was taken on a phone?) and the fox was pulled up closer.

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[jbs1125]

I like how the flowers to the left aren't focused in, it added a lot more to the picture. This ones from my phone to.

[unknownuser]

I like how the flowers to the left aren't focused in, it added a lot more to the picture. This ones from my phone to.Love the colors and the contrast between the sky and trees/deck. the only thing I think would make it better is if it were not taken on a phone.

http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/juliedx3/devvvv.jpg

[Iris]

Love the colors and the contrast between the sky and trees/deck. the only thing I think would make it better is if it were not taken on a phone.

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the photo is well taken-the blurryness of the objects in the mirror are contrasted nicely with the sharp clarity of the outline of the mirror. I like the beautiful simplicity of it. But I think that, while this photo is well constructed, it's missing a depth, or story. There's nothing in the mirrored image that's especially powerful. For example if there was a person there, or a heart or something, with that 'caption' that objects are closer than they appear, it gives a very powerful message.

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[User Deleted]

It has a nice clarity I have a hard time achieving. The black corner is distracting though it indicated the angle and sculpture of the face. The angle was nice and intentional or not the glare on the eye was nice. The blur of the eyelashes contrast nicely though the green hue is somewhat distracting. All in all a lovely photo.

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[Iris]

It has a nice clarity I have a hard time achieving. The black corner is distracting though it indicated the angle and sculpture of the face. The angle was nice and intentional or not the glare on the eye was nice. The blur of the eyelashes contrast nicely though the green hue is somewhat distracting. All in all a lovely photo.

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I really like the focus-I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I like that the ladybug isn't centered, that's it's part of the scene and not the whole photo. I also like the lighting a lot-it's very soft and sweet. That being said, it might be better to get it closer up, by cropping out the top, which seems unnecessary as it adds nothing to the photo. Also, the color of the ladybug is really pretty, but consider using an editing program (it doesn't need to be photoshop-windows photo gallery is more than enough for the basics) to brighten up colors and increase contrast. If you are good at using photoshop or whatever, try playing with the photo to exercise your skills and creativity-for example imagine the photo was black and white besides for a beautiful, vibrant red ladybug. :)

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[User Deleted]

I really like the focus-I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I like that the ladybug isn't centered, that's it's part of the scene and not the whole photo. I also like the lighting a lot-it's very soft and sweet. That being said, it might be better to get it closer up, by cropping out the top, which seems unnecessary as it adds nothing to the photo. Also, the color of the ladybug is really pretty, but consider using an editing program (it doesn't need to be photoshop-windows photo gallery is more than enough for the basics) to brighten up colors and increase contrast. If you are good at using photoshop or whatever, try playing with the photo to exercise your skills and creativity-for example imagine the photo was black and white besides for a beautiful, vibrant red ladybug. :)

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The green of the tree and the red on the ground contrast nicely, accentuating the more faded blue colors (such as in the fur and on the tree trunk. Personally I would like to see the rest of the tail, for a more complete feel to the photograph. It wold also help add to the size of the photo.
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Yeah, my typical style is focusing things to the corner with a nice background, that was intentional. I used a magnifying glass and still couldn't get too close up. It took a long time to get it on my side of the grass so I took the first good one after an hour give or take. I personally, as ridiculous as this is, like to accentuate the realism of a photo. Other than correcting lighting I like to keep the natural feel of a photograph-- especially a nature one.

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[northskater110]

^I like it, it's a nice perspective. Thumbs up.

sports.
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[User Deleted]

I like how (you? Movement media?) captured the splash. The angle would have been better at a higher angle in my opinion because that feels like a commercial. The person in the background might have looked better if more heavily blurred.

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[unknownuser]

I think your photo is too far in, or too far out. The corners of the rims, the white, it is cut off. It needs to stay or go... other than that I don't see anything wrong with it :)

image (http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/305/3/2/sparks_of_rubies__by_chromafox-d4eobpv.jpg)I really like how you made it look like you're looking out of the trees. Only criticism is that I think the flare is kinda distracting and bright.


First concert I did, had crappy lens. :p

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[DarkNick]

It's a good idea for a photographer (creative)
the photos colours aren't wrong-'cause you wrote something about crappy lens.. (that much). The blur seems artistic!
I don't like the crowd from behind,if you had taken only a bit more of the stage and him it would be better!

[BOSS]

Love the perspective and lighting.

[jimmyboy92]

Nice! Not sure if you can on GT....but turning the steering so you can see the face of the wheel always makes a car shot look better. Left turn in your case. :)

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[BOSS]

Nice! Not sure if you can on GT....but turning the steering so you can see the face of the wheel always makes a car shot look better. Left turn in your case. :)

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I do agree but you can't do that on GT...witch sucks
Love the black and white oldies look very nice snow as well.

[Black Eight]

No photo to critique, so I'll restart it.

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[unknownuser]

No photo to critique, so I'll restart it.

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Nice use of rule-of-thirds, interesting color and contrast between the bright building and dreary sky, nice focus. Like it. :]

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[Unfortunate1]

My profile picture is my picture.

Above me? interesting picture. fedora and necklaces are cool. Whatever that face is adds humor. 8.5/10

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[User Deleted]

Oh dang that's cool. My one and only complaint is the lack of a stem. It would'a looked like a little tuff of hair :3

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[unknownuser]

Thanks, I think I agree, but that was the only apple we had. ;]

I really like the perspective, colors, and group of four flowers there in the middle. I think the one on the bottom left is a little distracting, though...

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[Iris]

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Wow. that's incredible. it has a very dreamy, ethereal feel. I was thinking of saying that it might be better if a part of it was a little more in focus, but no. It looks so beautifully surreal the way you did it. The colors are amazing and there's no noise in the background, which really enhances the photo. Really, truly beautiful. Great job!

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[unknownuser]

Thank you!

I really love your macro- the colors, the focus... all great! I think that just maybe it would be more pleasing to the eye if the droplet was more to the left because that's just where your eye usually drifts first, but then again, if you did that, you'd loose the tiny little droplet all the way to the left, which I think adds a nice touch...

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[SamB]

I love the focus of this image and the composition. The focus at the bottom however does not blend in as well as it could I my opinion. But I do really like the image over all.

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[Iris]

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I love the colors; they're incredibly vibrant and really pop out nicely. That's a great spot for photography :) you can create some very powerful photos. My criticism lies in the fact that there's no real focus. My eye doesn't know where to rest, what to look at. If you payed more attention to one spot while the colors of the rest of the scene meshed together, the scene would be more powerful. Perhaps even bring a model to pose there, and have this incredible scene in the background.

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[unknownuser]

I love the colors; they're incredibly vibrant and really pop out nicely. That's a great spot for photography :) you can create some very powerful photos. My criticism lies in the fact that there's no real focus. My eye doesn't know where to rest, what to look at. If you payed more attention to one spot while the colors of the rest of the scene meshed together, the scene would be more powerful. Perhaps even bring a model to pose there, and have this incredible scene in the background.

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Beautiful!
Only thing I'd have to say is I think I'd personally like it a tiny bit brighter. :]

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[SamB]

Beautiful!
Only thing I'd have to say is I think I'd personally like it a tiny bit brighter. :]

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Love this, the composition and the focus are just great! I don't think there are any bad points for this at all :)

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[Electra Heart]

Love this, the composition and the focus are just great! I don't think there are any bad points for this at all :)

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Aw! It's Hedwig!!!!! :3 Sweet photography but seriously I want him :P

[SamB]

^ Thank you :)

I like the photo, it could be better. I think what you could have done to improve it was to make the focus sharper and also the bird at the edge that has been cut in half, either have got it all in or none of it. It would make it a lot stronger.

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I developed the film and printed it all as well :)

[Iris]

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I developed the film and printed it all as well :)

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I like the feel you get off the photo-this old gothic tone. The black and white, bare trees, clouds, and tower-like structures to the right really help get that across. My criticism is that I don't quite get the message of this photo. It would have been better if you took the photo from a different angle-perhaps a close-up of the trees with the outline of the structures in the background or the opposite. Also the the right corner, there's what I assume is a glare, which can work well in some photos, but here it feels messy. It makes the tower structure blurry and takes away from the overall quality. Basically taking the photo from a different angle would rectify all this, but great job bringing across the tone :).

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[DarkNick]

I like the power that the center of the flower has (Sharpness)
The fact that it's just the flower in the photo makes it look as beautiful as it can be seen (in general).
I also like the blurriness of the petals in the ''background''.

[Electra Heart]

^ Thank you :)

I like the photo, it could be better. I think what you could have done to improve it was to make the focus sharper and also the bird at the edge that has been cut in half, either have got it all in or none of it. It would make it a lot stronger.

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I developed the film and printed it all as well :)

Yeah not my best work but thanks :P

And shweet cards bro

[DarkNick]

You forgot to put a photo in your post so I'm restarting it... :)

[Mortal Coil]

I like the shadows of the strings, they rarely stand out so well with that sepia tone :) nice job
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[DarkNick]

Thanks a lot for your sweet comment! :)

Again there's no photo in your comment (pls keep the thread alive!!! :D)
Restarting it, again! ^_^

[SamB]

I really like the focus in this picture! and I like the colour popping with the pills :) one critique, there is a bot to much in the image if it was just the smaller pills i think it would have been better :)

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[DarkNick]

I really like your photo as well. It's a good example of fireworks photography.
You could also add a quote or something since the right side of the photo is completely dark. ;)

[SamB]

Its a nice photo, but there isn't really a proper focus point. You need to make one part really sharp focus and the rest out because I'm not really sure where to look I do like it though :)

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[DarkNick]

[There's a focus point but it's just not too strong (my lens -_- and the distance of the tree)]
I like your photo.The pose of the model is good and the effect that you added is smart.
But it shouldn't ''hide'' the model that much if you know what I mean! :)
Other than that it's a really good photo that doesn't need any corrections at all!


I put this in a WPO competition (I still wait the results) :rolleyes:

[SamB]

Ahh now the focus on that one is a lot nice :) I really like the composition and there isn't really anything wrong with it at all (except the dust, but that's just me being really picky)
C:

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[gone123]

I really like the composition and the landscape!

Here's my contribution:

http://i1080.photobucket.com/albums/j336/flightkid9/Pana1.jpg

[SamB]

Wow that is a beautiful landscape. All i would say is you just need to up the contrast a little just so that there is a bigger difference in the colours in the hills and river because at the moment they all sort of blend into one.

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[muddygrand]

I like the effect of the sun. Maybe it should have been more centered though.
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[SamB]

I like how you have got the reflections of the trees in the image and also the composition of the image.

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[matt25]

Oh wow that is really good.
I especially like the way that it brings the leaves in to focus (and everything else is blurred), but you used imperfect leaves. A lot of people would hunt around for the perfect leaves, but actually it makes your photo look even better

here's mine:

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[SamB]

I love this photo so much Julie! The barn just has so much character and the composition of the image is perfect :) Love it.

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[Iris]

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I really like how you captured the water here. It flows so beautifully and naturally; truly gorgeous. The entire fountain as well is quite beautiful, and the stone design combined with the great contrast between light and shadow give the scene a lot of power. I think the photo would look better if it was straightened though, as the falling water feels add at this angle. Also it would have been stronger if the background was more blurry, as the scene there takes away from the quiet magnificence of the fountain.

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[SamB]

Love this photo :) the composition is great and the contrast of colours in it are really nice as well, only thing that i would change is to make the tongue more focused as the most focused nit is the nose and eyes of the cat but i think it would be better if the tongue was a bit more sharp.

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Its not really a photo but it was for my photography coursework final piece :)

[unknownuser]

[QUOTE=SamB;1608292]Love this photo :) the composition is great and the contrast of colours in it are really nice as well, only thing that i would change is to make the tongue more focused as the most focused nit is the nose and eyes of the cat but i think it would be better if the tongue was a bit more sharp.

[Elijah329]

I think it's really nicely done! I don't really know anything on videos, so I can't really criticize you there... I am a big fan of the black and white though. Just curious, did you edit it to be B&W or can the K-r take video in B&W.

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I like the photo a lot however it seems like it would look a little better with a post-crop vignetting to kind of highlight the ominous feeling of the crows on the wire. Great perspective choice. http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ts2P_s9T6Pk/TxYTleH1_2I/AAAAAAAAAHI/7A1q7Lea1IU/s1600/Shotgun+Only+Sign+2+%25281+of+1%2529.jpg

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[Iris]

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This is a really sweet photo. The purple of the flowers pop nicely, and the woman has a gentle smile on her face that fits the setting perfectly. The bokeh in the background adds a nice touch. Have you tried taking close-ups of the flowers? They look really photogenic.

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[chrisawesome]

Cool, that kind of looks like a bottom view of a diving board once you look at it. How do I look? hmmmmm

[Cognizant]

Can we start this thread up again? :)

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Z6 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8328129143/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

Being a subway nut, this is really pretty looking! I like how it's dab smack in the middle. Normally I dislike it like that, but this goes well.

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[unknownuser]

[QUOTE=Toy Trains;2131803]Being a subway nut, this is really pretty looking! I like how it's dab smack in the middle. Normally I dislike it like that, but this goes well.

[Cognizant]

Thanks, Pat.

Whether staged or candid, I like your photo because its got two of my favorite things; it's b&w and a street shot.
Compositionally, I think it's a strong image. Good use of rule of thirds and and the leading lines of the road make it interesting.

"Behind Bars"
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Thank you! It was not staged :)

I really can't say anything negative about this picture. I like the use of the rule of thirds, and the contrast (if applied in post?) really gives it that pop.

[Sonic Boom]

I took this one from my bedroom window with my Panasonic Lumix DMC-FS18:

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=5147&pictureid=28733

[KingDolphin]

I took this one from my bedroom window with my Panasonic Lumix DMC-FS18:

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I really like the lighting in this shot! Not going to get critical on the focus since it was taken on a point and shoot, although one thing I would of changed is the angle to keep the house out of the background.

'The Spirit of a Ghost'
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[unknownuser]

[QUOTE=KingDolphin;2134999]I really like the lighting in this shot! Not going to get critical on the focus since it was taken on a point and shoot, although one thing I would of changed is the angle to keep the house out of the background.

[Perfect_Insanity]

Nice! I like how the black and white set the sad tone of the picture. It sort of looks a little bland, though. Maybe some more contrast would be cool.


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[Cognizant]

Interesting angle.

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[Ryan660]

I really love the perspective. Some nice repetition with the benches there, leads the eye straight to the focal point. Great photograph!

My take on low key photography:
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5127/skulluq.png

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[Ryan660]

Very nice!
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[Ryan660]

Nice vanishing point, almost makes the guitar seem endless.

Low key, once again.
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[Danny Phantom]

Nice use of lighting to add emphasis, once again.

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That is a nice pic! Full of detail and I'm a sucker for B&W :P

http://i.imgur.com/ZjNbhH4.jpg

[Cognizant]

That is a nice pic! Full of detail and I'm a sucker for B&W :P

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Nice composition, and nice contrast. :)

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8531/8625907689_ef9942a6cc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8625907689/)
Tail Light (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8625907689/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

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[lostdependent]

Interesting... maybe I'd just crop off that part of a window (?) on the right, it's a little distracting.

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Audience of None (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8536357534/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

I love it gives a sense of infinity and the curve makes the foto amazing...

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[Crie]

Got a kind of creepy story behind it, I like that In a picture. The black & white is very appropriate

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[unknownuser]

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[Jevon]

I like the black background it really makes the green pop
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[Plane And Simple]

Very nice contrast with the background, nice light exposure. Shadow looks great too.

Sorry I can't embed the picture, I'm on my phone.

[ItsDarien]

Very nice picture, I love how the tower stands out in front of the blue Sky.

http://static.ddmcdn.com/gif/ten-amazing-telescopes-1.jpg

~Darien.

[Brighter.Tomorrow]

I always love cosmos pictures. They're very calming and interesting at the same time.


http://24.media.tumblr.com/e843b3d1207e06141e7fd889f1aee671/tumblr_mn8r42eDcF1r7i2kvo1_1280.jpg

[Move On]

I think the idea of your shot. The angle of the globe is cool as well as the proximity and the focus, but I feel as if the lighting is off. If I were you I would have had a soft yellow/white light coming over your right should and put the globe up against a black background for dramatic effect. Then you would've been able to bring out the different tones in the globe.

http://i1211.photobucket.com/albums/cc421/Lexi_Gajownik/7768448362_2409982416_o_zpsb6aff67e.jpg (http://s1211.photobucket.com/user/Lexi_Gajownik/media/7768448362_2409982416_o_zpsb6aff67e.jpg.html)

[Cognizant]

i love how the focus is pulled onto the leaf and the rain drop. great work :)

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3713/8848239016_53c0f88600_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8848239016/)
Serenade (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8848239016/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

[Blayne Pellican]

I like the simplicity
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[lightPainting]

I like the simplicity


well to me, the background seams a bit distracting. what you can do is pull the camera back about 1-2 feet and then zoom in to compress the background. If you do edit your photos try adding more contrast in the pictures. i'm guessing that the subject that you'r photographing is inside the flower. make sure you have the subject focused right to show more detail. (I understand that when a image is uploaded to VT, some of the quality is lost)

[Danny Phantom]

well to me, the background seams a bit distracting. what you can do is pull the camera back about 1-2 feet and then zoom in to compress the background. If you do edit your photos try adding more contrast in the pictures. i'm guessing that the subject that you'r photographing is inside the flower. make sure you have the subject focused right to show more detail. (I understand that when a image is uploaded to VT, some of the quality is lost)

I like the clarity.

http://i.imgur.com/WH1qi2c.jpg

[unknownuser]

[QUOTE=Danny Photograph;2315746]I like the clarity.

[Danny Phantom]

I like how you've got things up in the foreground as well as the background. It gives the photo depth and makes me feel like I'm there.

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8708084113/)
School's Out (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8708084113/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

I love the shadows, and I can feel the emotion of finishing school in itself by looking at the photo.

http://i.imgur.com/9gMHoz2.jpg

[Cognizant]

Nice color composition and clarity, makes me feel like the Snake's right there (eep!)

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7446/8954015522_de5b9d4ba2_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8954015522/)
Emergency Exit (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8954015522/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

[lightPainting]

Nice color composition and clarity, makes me feel like the Snake's right there (eep!)

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8954015522/)
Emergency Exit (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8954015522/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

pull back and show more of the scene or area. if the subject is the emergency sign, you should also show the emergency door. & i think taking the photo in portrait than landscape will work better.http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=5680&pictureid=33903

[michaelr97]

I would use a softer light effect the foreground is a little light for this shot.

http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127861
More of my photography work is on www.guardofpost900.webs.com

[Asterix]

I would use a softer light effect the foreground is a little light for this shot.

image (http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127861)
More of my photography work is on www.guardofpost900.webs.com

michael, sadly i cannot see your photo. sorry!
here is a picture i took whilst in cambodia.

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[michaelr97]

michael, sadly i cannot see your photo. sorry!
here is a picture i took whilst in cambodia.

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In my opinion this photo is perfect for what you are doing (the cultural effect) great job
http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127872

My web page of work doesn't seem to be working with this web site so i posted the link to the pic. More pics of my work are on the site to.

[Asterix]

In my opinion this photo is perfect for what you are doing (the cultural effect) great job
http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127872

My web page of work doesn't seem to be working with this web site so i posted the link to the pic. More pics of my work are on the site to.

love the vibrant colours of the flags and the subjects, are they police? or military? I think that the men would have alot more impact on the picture if the background was blurred more. (I think that is done by reducing the f stop, but I'm not sure. cant remember off the top of my head)
here's anther pic. lets keep this thread alive! its a really cool idea. :D
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[michaelr97]

love the vibrant colours of the flags and the subjects, are they police? or military? I think that the men would have alot more impact on the picture if the background was blurred more. (I think that is done by reducing the f stop, but I'm not sure. cant remember off the top of my head)
here's anther pic. lets keep this thread alive! its a really cool idea. :D
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your pic didn't show up and i opened the link but the pic didnt show up.:)

and to answer you question they are poilce officers at a state mamorial in fl state capital

[Asterix]

your pic didn't show up and i opened the link but the pic didnt show up.:)

ill try it again. 5659

[michaelr97]

ill try it again. 5659

i would say to use a "sports" function on the camera for this pic but not to bad the sports shot will help get the full detail of the runners.
http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127852

Got with the company its back up.:-)

[Cognizant]

I like it, very simple.

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3766/8951908967_5295043a9f_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8951908967/)
Van Hool (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8951908967/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

[Asterix]

I like it, very simple.

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8951908967/)
Van Hool (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/8951908967/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

i like it in black and white, gives it an arty feel:) what city is it?

here is my photo, I just reversed my normal lens and took a picture of this 10 pence coin because I can't afford a proper macro lens.
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[michaelr97]

i like it in black and white, gives it an arty feel:) what city is it?

here is my photo, I just reversed my normal lens and took a picture of this 10 pence coin because I can't afford a proper macro lens.
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Its not bad it looks great for having to substitute for not having the lens you needed for the shot
http://guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127870http://www.guardofpost900.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=179127870

[Cognizant]

i like it in black and white, gives it an arty feel:) what city is it?

Thanks! This is in Milpitas, California and the Agency is AC Transit.

[unknownuser]

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[Hortcoke]

Not bad. The only thing that kind of bothers me are the signs and elevators in the back, but you couldn't really do much to get them out of the photo.

Otherwise, a good photo showing the guard and the seal.

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/9096636983/)
Why... (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/9096636983/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr


Wow, I liked so much this one, the angle, the colours :B

Here is mine

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=6252&pictureid=33736

[unknownuser]

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[lightPainting]

Thanks. :)

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8559295856/)
DA*55 1.4 action crop sample (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8559295856/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

looks good, nice framing (did you crop?). I would've had the background more out-of-focused(the branches near his head can be distracting ),& you know what... try and see how it would look in black&white. http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=5680&pictureid=34134

[ImCoolBeans]

Woo this is now a sticky.

[Cognizant]

looks good, nice framing (did you crop?). I would've had the background more out-of-focused(the branches near his head can be distracting ),& you know what... try and see how it would look in black&white. image (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=5680&pictureid=34134)

I really like how the color is emphasized on the apple. Nice smoke :)

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5480/9201938041_7ee8878797_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9201938041/)
Deserted (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9201938041/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

[ImCoolBeans]

I really like how the color is emphasized on the apple. Nice smoke :)

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9201938041/)
Deserted (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9201938041/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

The subject of the photo intrigues me. It's a train station with a train parked in it, but nobody to be found. I like it. I think the geometric angles of the cement building with the pillars and the stairs draw your eye in very nicely and make you want to examine the photo to see if anybody can be found, even in the background, but no, not one person. The shadows and highlights contrast each other interestingly. I normally wouldn't be thrilled to have the shadow cutting through my image like that; though it works rather nicely here with the angles. Nice shot!

Not so recent, taken in the fall, but never posted here:
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8454/7941496006_e887bf1c83_c.jpg

[Cognizant]

The subject of the photo intrigues me. It's a train station with a train parked in it, but nobody to be found. I like it. I think the geometric angles of the cement building with the pillars and the stairs draw your eye in very nicely and make you want to examine the photo to see if anybody can be found, even in the background, but no, not one person. The shadows and highlights contrast each other interestingly. I normally wouldn't be thrilled to have the shadow cutting through my image like that; though it works rather nicely here with the angles. Nice shot!

Not so recent, taken in the fall, but never posted here:
image (http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8454/7941496006_e887bf1c83_c.jpg)

Thanks! Maybe something good did happen from the BART strike after all :P

I really do suck at critique, but I really like how the person is offset, like they're about to venture off in the creek.

[Asterix]

Thanks! Maybe something good did happen from the BART strike after all :P

I really do suck at critique, but I really like how the person is offset, like they're about to venture off in the creek.

you didnt post a picture bloo :( , but here is one of my efforts at photography:
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[Danny Phantom]

you didnt post a picture bloo :( , but here is one of my efforts at photography:
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woah where did his head go? :o

http://i.imgur.com/ivd5N4N.jpg

[unknownuser]

[QUOTE=Danny Photograph;2390306]woah where did his head go? :o

[Party256]

I love the wilderness, but theres something missing

[Rain Boy]

I love how the main boulevard crosses this scene in a diagonal, and seems to head off into the sunset. As for the train tracks, consider cropping them just at the line where they intersect the street. The tracks and the street make a 'V' shape which I think is cool.

[Drummerdude97]

I really like the angle that it was taken from. The dark buildings make the sky look awesome. The tracks go out of view at the perfect spot intersecting with the street

[tovaris]

Nice use of sunlight, but do try to avoid that pesky centred motive next time.
https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-ogqWh3UKDEc/Ug9o9wb-_FI/AAAAAAAAMeQ/1Rn6FNJzg4I/w471-h704-no/DSC_0378.JPG

[Cognizant]

Nice use of sunlight, but do try to avoid that pesky centred motive next time.
image (https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-ogqWh3UKDEc/Ug9o9wb-_FI/AAAAAAAAMeQ/1Rn6FNJzg4I/w471-h704-no/DSC_0378.JPG)

Interesting angle, but there's something about the pull focus that puts me off. The blur just looks......weird to me.

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5531/9568575178_59a438c72c_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9568575178/)
Looking South (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9568575178/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

BTW, I know that 90% of my photos are transit. I took some shots around my school but my SD card reader is broken. :(

[unknownuser]

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[Cognizant]

BW looks great on this shot, Pat. It brings out the lines on the train and lights that lead you into the photo and give it a sense of depth.

Sorry if I might have posted this photo previously, I don't have my external HDD with all my photos on it on me at the moment...
image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8315996791/)
4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/8315996791/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

I really like that. The focus is on the rising figure, and the lighting gives the figure a sense of importance and power.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7322/9685044568_19382025ae_c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9685044568/)
Stairwell (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9685044568/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

[kylem]

nice

[CaliKiDD]

I really like that. The focus is on the rising figure, and the lighting gives the figure a sense of importance and power.

image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9685044568/)
Stairwell (http://www.flickr.com/photos/patricklikestrains/9685044568/) by PatBook Pro (http://www.flickr.com/people/patricklikestrains/), on Flickr

Im going to be honest, I dont enjoy this photo... Its at a nice perspective but thats all this has going for it, id like to see you add elements into the photo give the stairs a purpose.
http://media.tumblr.com/96c09e57502bbfc36336eac009aa6e57/tumblr_inline_mtd830SoMH1rqgo39.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

Im going to be honest, I dont enjoy this photo... Its at a nice perspective but thats all this has going for it, id like to see you add elements into the photo give the stairs a purpose.
image (http://media.tumblr.com/96c09e57502bbfc36336eac009aa6e57/tumblr_inline_mtd830SoMH1rqgo39.jpg)

That's a very powerful photo. The lighting, the angle, everything. It's great. You were very successful in accomplishing what you aimed for. Great job, keep shooting and keep posting your shots!

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8320/7941498296_d94f74d80a_z.jpg

[Danny Phantom]

That's a very powerful photo. The lighting, the angle, everything. It's great. You were very successful in accomplishing what you aimed for. Great job, keep shooting and keep posting your shots!

image (http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8320/7941498296_d94f74d80a_z.jpg)

As usual, nice photo Mikey :P

http://i.imgur.com/h6pKm2x.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

As usual, nice photo Mikey :P

image (http://i.imgur.com/h6pKm2x.jpg)

My picture was taken just two or three blocks away from where yours was.

I like your photo, it's bright, colorful and that draws in my attention, but as I look at it, it lacks some compositional elements. When taking a photo, you should process what the subject is in your head, and seek to capture that subject in the most interesting or effective way that you can. Your picture is very aesthetically pleasing, but it's a front-on picture of somebody's art. Try using things like that as enhancers to your photo. For example, if you wanted to capture that mural, you could take a very compositional photo of it, and while the mural would still be the subject of the photo, it would be an interesting take on the mural and what's going on around it.

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8320/7941496214_dcf90cfd7a_z.jpg

I took the photos that I last posted months ago. I'll try to get out and take some new shots to put in here :P For now I'll just use these, sorry.

[unknownuser]

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[lightPainting]

I like the feeling of movement that the water ripples and her pose convey.

Looking forward to your new photos, Mike.


(it's a boot, if anyone's wonderin'...)
image (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/10703172293/)
Frye (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/10703172293/) by ptaxlmtd (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr
I like the composition, but i feel like the lighting should be a bit more dramatic.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7411/10148438784_874cb8dab3_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/10148438784/)
light house (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/10148438784/) by Ricardo.Co (http://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

[Kid0809]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/10638922256/in/photostream/
I like the waves and the lighting of the photo

[lightPainting]

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5486/10828689053_e578020a50_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/sirpenguin/10828689053/)
hallway (http://www.flickr.com/photos/sirpenguin/10828689053/) by Sir.Penguin (http://www.flickr.com/people/sirpenguin/), on Flickr

[ksdnfkfr]

I like it. A hallway without doors.
Very mysterious. I like the tint too. Very Matrixish.

http://i.imgur.com/ZPR3plc.png

[Danny Phantom]

I like it. A hallway without doors.
Very mysterious. I like the tint too. Very Matrixish.

image (http://i.imgur.com/ZPR3plc.png)

This picture sort of breaks the rule of thirds, which is good because its the one rule I ALWAYS break :P

Colour of sky is vibrant, but I wish I saw a little bit more of it. I like the steam clouds rising from the mountains though.

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3810/11616776196_bc32e43d8d_c.jpg

[DarknessUnicorn]

I love how it gives a really vintage feel... I don't really know much about critiquing but I feel like there could be more going on, like more people. I really like it though ^-^
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[teehee]

I love snow scenes. Perhaps there could have been some post processing done to make the foreground slightly brighter, but the composition is perfect.

https://scontent-b-lga.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/1557460_10152111120994578_1197449032_n.jpg

[Danny Phantom]

I love snow scenes. Perhaps there could have been some post processing done to make the foreground slightly brighter, but the composition is perfect.

image (https://scontent-b-lga.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/1557460_10152111120994578_1197449032_n.jpg)

Wonderful! Don't like the small glare spots though.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7409/11899573083_820c147ba2_b.jpg

[AlexOnToast]

Very Vintage-printoutesque :) Very nice 8/10
Heres a pic from when I went camping last summer near Muckross House in Co. Kerry, southern Ireland...
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/album.php?albumid=6954&pictureid=37407

[AUS01]

Very Vintage-printoutesque :) Very nice 8/10
Heres a pic from when I went camping last summer near Muckross House in Co. Kerry, southern Ireland...
image (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/album.php?albumid=6954&pictureid=37407)

Picture Didn't show up Alex!
I'll continue on with one of mine of the Aurora Australis from Tasmania.

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-RTY2PtPe9RM/UurWHb_f_NI/AAAAAAAADNk/8EGFvk27PXA/w1023-h603-no/IMG_2347.jpg

[AlexOnToast]

Picture Didn't show up Alex!
I'll continue on with one of mine of the Aurora Australis from Tasmania.

image (https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-RTY2PtPe9RM/UurWHb_f_NI/AAAAAAAADNk/8EGFvk27PXA/w1023-h603-no/IMG_2347.jpg)

Fixed it :)

[AUS01]

Ahh Good! I really like it, very minimalist. If I were you I'd crop in some of the grass on the bottom to align it with the rule of thirds so that the composition makes it pop! But Yeah, You guys have some amazing landscapes over in Europe! I'd say I was jealous but Tasmania's probably just as good ;)

Riight, So next person does my photo up there i guess ^^

[Danny Phantom]

Picture Didn't show up Alex!
I'll continue on with one of mine of the Aurora Australis from Tasmania.

image (https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-RTY2PtPe9RM/UurWHb_f_NI/AAAAAAAADNk/8EGFvk27PXA/w1023-h603-no/IMG_2347.jpg)

The vibrance and colors are wonderful! You can even see all the stars in the sky, as a big city kid, I never really seen so much myself in person. Great shot!

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3828/12284170056_722939bcdd_c.jpg

[lightPainting]

The vibrance and colors are wonderful! You can even see all the stars in the sky, as a big city kid, I never really seen so much myself in person. Great shot!

image (http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3828/12284170056_722939bcdd_c.jpg)

I think going at a wider angel to show more of the city building, would make the photo a bit more eye catchy. but over all great composition.

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5513/12263466096_a7778c7e21_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/sirpenguin/12263466096/)
IMG_4197 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/sirpenguin/12263466096/) by Sir.Penguin (http://www.flickr.com/people/sirpenguin/), on Flickr

[Marius44]

Pretty nice composition and exposure. It's good that it's not out of focus either.

My picture (http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/11448435635/)

[AUS01]

Nice Marius,
Great Composition, I'd be inclined to lighten the foreground a bit and generally give the image some more contrast, make it pop!

Here's Mine of a Thunderstorm we had last night. Inside through the window, wasn't going to go outside! Haha, Unfortunately the one actual Lightning bolt I saw was when I was setting up my camera, so this is jut of the light through the clouds. Was fairly happy with it :)

[JamesSC]

Try sticking your tongue out with the dog...

[AlexOnToast]

Try sticking your tongue out with the dog...

It's for Photography, not avatars XD

Anyway, to the guy above, it's very nice! We're in a storm atm...Maybe I'l take a pic!

Heres mine
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/album.php?albumid=6954&pictureid=37409

[Asterix]

It's for Photography, not avatars XD

Anyway, to the guy above, it's very nice! We're in a storm atm...Maybe I'l take a pic!

Heres mine
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/album.php?albumid=6954&pictureid=37409

Awesome photo, I would adjust the curves in photoshop a little bit to really give it that depth. if thats Kerry (I assume it is since it says kerry underneath :P) thats pretty cool. I have family friends living there!

here's my photo:
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[lightPainting]

here's my photo:
6292
the only negative thing (constructive criticism) is the composition. I see what you are trying to do with the leaves. Using the leaves to help frame the image was a good idea but i feel like you forget about the background. although, i love the lush green
mine:
https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5554/14253909502_b2df8f9e62_c.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/nHz1Go)down the road (https://flic.kr/p/nHz1Go) by Sir.Penguin (https://www.flickr.com/people//), on Flickr

[dame]

beautiful photo, i would love to see it in color
http://38.media.tumblr.com/83fb9e980ffb24a696f83f7e9d73a111/tumblr_n8cw8f70Wh1qczsmko1_1280.jpg

[Kaskins]

It's a typical photo, not interesting, but eyelashes are very nice <3
http://images66.fotosik.pl/60/8aff4715ee7743d0gen.jpg

[goodnightxmoonx]

Oooh, it's interesting. It's a magical shot, with the smoke and everything. I think it shows a very interesting dynamic betweeen the boy and the girl. It tells a story without words :)

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=7355&pictureid=38852

[lightPainting]

Oooh, it's interesting. It's a magical shot, with the smoke and everything. I think it shows a very interesting dynamic betweeen the boy and the girl. It tells a story without words :)

image (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=7355&pictureid=38852)

interesting lighting. the dutch angle gives the feeling of movement. i personaly feel like it needs more clarity.
https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7111/13548812064_0a35290c7a_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/mDgcN1)IMG_6733.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/mDgcN1) by Sir.Penguin (https://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

[amybah]

Sir.Penguin i love your art :) really good

[lightPainting]

Sir.Penguin i love your art :) really good
thankyou :)

https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7519/15958918787_9c62e59b67_b.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/qjeCyc)12-29-14 (30).jpg (https://flic.kr/p/qjeCyc) by Sir.Penguin (https://www.flickr.com/people/[email protected]/), on Flickr

[lightPainting]

lets get this started again
https://c4.staticflickr.com/8/7779/18132932542_eafcd2bc3d_c.jpg (https://flic.kr/p/tCm26Y)5-26-15 (15).jpg (https://flic.kr/p/tCm26Y) by Ricardo Coronado (https://www.flickr.com/photos/sirpenguin/), on Flickr

[Uranus]

lightPainting
Another fabulous photo!
You always show something with really good quality

[AcuteVision]

Lumia1020

[theHoneyBadger]

Its a nice use of perspective on the phone, well done. Just a bit over exposed, so watch your F stop and exposure compensation. But I like the idea :yes:



https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-U0DugHbDg8E/VF85zpEX8CI/AAAAAAAAAGQ/V0VeVLIdHsE/w800-h530-no/_DSC0736

[angelina]

[QUOTE=Iris;1567292]I think this is a great idea :).I love love love the perspective. It's so fluid and beautiful; it fascinates me. I really enjoy the concept of it-very powerful. I like that the colors are grey but the lighting is so perfect that it doesn't feel bland. It also has a kind of rhythm in the pattern that's really enticing. The only minor criticism I have is that, while the perspective is really great, I think if your camera was lower, and you got a personal shot of a few chairs and from there the eye moved to the thousands lying beyond, it would add more depth to the photo. Other than that though, really great job :).

Nice concept and guidance

[Let Me Be a Pony]

Its a nice use of perspective on the phone, well done. Just a bit over exposed, so watch your F stop and exposure compensation. But I like the idea :yes:



image (https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-U0DugHbDg8E/VF85zpEX8CI/AAAAAAAAAGQ/V0VeVLIdHsE/w800-h530-no/_DSC0736)

Do you know the aperture that you used? Was it a crop sensor camera? What focal length did you use? If I have to guess, you used a long angle lens, crop sensor, not too sure about the aperture though(It ain't too wide and ain't too closed, that's for sure)
Can you tell me the exact focal length you used?

[ImCoolBeans]

Hey guys, I'd just like to say in order for this thread to work well, you should really post a photograph of yours along with your critique so it doesn't end with somebody who didn't post a photo. Let's keep this going:


https://farm1.staticflickr.com/309/19270832460_be4b4a7318_c.jpg

[Sailor Mars]

I like the black and white color scheme with the forest. Makes it look mysterious and aloof.

http://i.imgur.com/dJNdfe4.jpg

[amgb]

Finally worked out how to post pics.

Ok, I like your photo Marz. The grey shades makes the location of the photo look desolated and devoid of life, and the perspective is interesting because we're not looking directly across at the view from the balcony fence thing, we're looking at the view from an angle. I like it~~

Ok hope this works, it should work...does it work??

[ImCoolBeans]

Cool photo, I like the texture of the sand and the sunlight hits the sand really well to give the photo a warm feeling.

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1570/24255565173_9099a0b530_c.jpg

[victoriamartin856]

although in black and white, the perspective and objects are so clear and clean. i love how you can see the reflection of the city on the wall on the left, and how she seems to be looking at just the slightest angle. i would maybe suggest playing around with the focus, and possibly blurring some areas and keeping others in focus. great photo!!

[ImCoolBeans]

I like the transition in the photo -- how it goes from more steady, to more blurred, to all out light painting. You get a real sense of a series in the photo. I like how the photo shows the same scene from three slightly different perspectives.

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1497/26658626405_1d8cb7ba14_c.jpg

[dxcxdzv]

I like it. The black&white doesn't look artificial (useless), plus, it makes a very great game of light with the reliefs.

http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/picture.php?albumid=7745&pictureid=40664

Spooky huh?

[Sailor Mars]

I like the bones :D Sp00ky effect. Also, the lighting adds a lot of eeriness to it.

http://i.imgur.com/7nh6gkF.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

I like the texture in the shot. The bricks and visible dirt on them is a good backdrop.

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1619/26560005671_5049e578f3_c.jpg

[Valentine_]

I really like it. I like the angle from which the photo was taken and the blue lighting.

https://scontent-fra3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t35.0-12/13493395_1288924667801882_1496642201_o.jpg?oh=f69419e7a558eb619f018d02b2206995&oe=576B6490

[Plane And Simple]

Great concept, I like the idea, but I slightly feel like it needs some more "addition" to it.

http://i.imgur.com/GT0iIQ8.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

Great use of focus, Nick. I love how the flowers slightly out of the foreground are blurry. The color is alluring, as well as the sharpness of the two closest flowers. Well done.

https://c3.staticflickr.com/8/7726/27833962570_eb88a4ac1b_z.jpg

[PSDX]

Looks pretty nice. Has something idyllic. Especially the fog above the Water gives it a nice effect.
https://yzfvzg.bn1304.livefilestore.com/y3mlcrmo5oYyiKXIXd1De8u7TH190zVsYO6CwvqyDBbHNTG0w6GPTac7YSGf0MhllmpXTu6R1y4KsVVa trsvHsLruiNZFN8_76pn6nZe-2OhE6tRBD_o1XSFuPkHmy5m86AMnmTD5IHCkCFlJ7bE2CEN2fEtQ0yUhEAmY7Gumx8qY0?width=6000&height=4000&cropmode=none
shot @ CANARY WHARF in London

[Atlantis]

I like it, how it sort of goes from dark to brighter on the right hand side, it's also pretty clear :)

http://i68.tinypic.com/4rrjno.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

I like the composition. I like that you took a slightly different approach to the beach sunset, and went for the silhouette and even for the tables in there. Nice shot.

https://c7.staticflickr.com/9/8320/7941496214_dcf90cfd7a_c.jpg

[PSDX]

I like the Contrasts, however I´m not so shure f B/W is the best idea for the image.

https://qjwpiw.bn1304.livefilestore.com/y3mpAA3thASzJ2Q79hRxoOSSLfCdjwxqxkZ9gv7fRMUgDXfsKuSxA3Sz4yOLTouxcfNgnxhRXzl0jLY-HlU4EOGipnUP_4SK74_6XZMAhWfgll4GhrCM3NpEPGOnykSBUw5G5mGnN0oDR5cE-smHI26mPL1j5D03DCDaEFpGsyyhyY?width=683&height=1024&cropmode=none

[Atlantis]

I quite like it, although the top half looks a bit darker than the bottom (not sure if it's meant to be like that or not)

My image:
https://s11.postimg.io/rgujqf4mb/20160824_115921.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

I like your point of view, looking between the rocks. I think it might be more interesting at a different angle. I take a lot of photos crouching or standing at different heights. You should give it a shot -- I like the photo though.

https://c5.staticflickr.com/1/711/21796545708_7225780cd5_c.jpg

[Just JT]

https://s14.postimg.org/8w0xvavlp/image.jpg (https://postimg.org/image/8w0xvavlp/)

https://s14.postimg.org/4o65mju65/image.jpg (https://postimg.org/image/4o65mju65/)


screen capture tool (https://postimage.org/app.php)

[Atlantis]

I quite like them. They both have a good point of view and I love the calmness that I can sense from the photo.

https://s18.postimg.org/m0b3lj2q1/IMG_20160908_WA0001.jpg

[ImCoolBeans]

I love the setting. Waterlilies are always pretty and the Japanese garden is an interesting landscape.

https://c6.staticflickr.com/2/1623/24837892109_179cf02950_c.jpg

[Jericho14]

Looks nice, I like the skyline at the back

https://scontent.fmel3-1.fna.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/11013331_1466461147012862_2901253111360817601_n.jpg?oh=a9dd7680f6637d80a420c3848 a1b3e8c&oe=58ADB70E

[Bluebyrd]

Looks nice, I like the skyline at the back

image (https://scontent.fmel3-1.fna.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/11013331_1466461147012862_2901253111360817601_n.jpg?oh=a9dd7680f6637d80a420c3848 a1b3e8c&oe=58ADB70E)

I like that there's a lot to see in the photo (the trees, streets, buildings, sky and water) but perhaps it would be better with one of them being the main focus. That's just being picky though. Good job!

http://i67.tinypic.com/de7i3t.jpg

[thefacepubekid]

I like that there's a lot to see in the photo (the trees, streets, buildings, sky and water) but perhaps it would be better with one of them being the main focus. That's just being picky though. Good job!

i67tinypic.com/de7i3tjpg]image

I like the obvious idea behind this image, but I think (Without being mean/rude) it could do with a bit of work, both in pre-shot setup and editing. Whatever filter is applied here takes away a lot of vibrance and gives the image a very dull, boring look.

Here's two I took on my EOS 30D. The night one was one of my first attempts at night photography, the lighting on the tree was actually a timed outside garage light. The other is an image of my dirt bike, a 2007 KTM 250 XCF-W. Excuse the poor quality of either picture, I had to compress them to be able to upload them.

[ClovesXIII]

^
I really love the outdoors one with the stars and trees. The two objects seem to almost blend together and it captures the viewers attention without trying to.
https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/14063868_239181326478199_6623338052718538718_n.jpg?oh=9fab987f72123828a3b3c9e8a0 6008f9&oe=5910C65E

https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/14095769_235619066834425_5631606596977733387_n.jpg?oh=d6f2a3c0ea0d991085204ff514 da5408&oe=590742A2

https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/13620061_214402522289413_2463677674601345789_n.jpg?oh=a0d238fca4a4260267a81f49f0 a5d117&oe=59460F00

Hope you enjoy them ;)

[Finn the Human]

https://i.imgur.com/Dy1cLvR.jpg
I over exposed the sky :(
https://i.imgur.com/0hZQoFH.jpg
The woodpecker image came out of my instagram since I can't find the original image.

[Karalectric]

^ yea the sky is overexposed, but great contrast between flag and background and the bird is so detailed, I feel like i can just touch it!! You must have a great camera.

...............

Here is mine...

I saw an unusual rainbow. I had never seen one like that before!

https://i.imgur.com/SipuYJE.jpg

[lightPainting]

^ yea the sky is overexposed, but great contrast between flag and background and the bird is so detailed, I feel like i can just touch it!! You must have a great camera.

...............

Here is mine...

I saw an unusual rainbow. I had never seen one like that before!

image (https://i.imgur.com/SipuYJE.jpg)

WOW! that is a really nice rainbow. Nice composition! Did you choose to show the power line?

[Karalectric]

WOW! that is a really nice rainbow. Nice composition! Did you choose to show the power line?

Oooh!! FINALLY someone noticed my pic! lol Thanks. :) yea that was a creative choice.

[Naturelover]

Lost Place

https://i.ibb.co/MSNkcwM/LP00.jpg

[lightPainting]

Lost Place

image (https://i.ibb.co/MSNkcwM/LP00.jpg)

The tree really adds to the spookiness of that abandoned place. would love to see more!

Oooh!! FINALLY someone noticed my pic! lol Thanks. :) yea that was a creative choice.

It worked out great! keep it up.

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Here is my photo

[Naturelover]

https://s18.directupload.net/images/190521/cltmrtbr.jpg
Amsterdam Grachten and Wester church