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Antagonist
December 30th, 2011, 01:37 AM
So I wrote a lullaby and everyone that I've shown it to has loved it. Here it is:

Please little baby go to sleep.
Please little angel go to sleep.

Close your eyes and relax,
Dream of rainbows and fairy dust tracks.

Please little baby go to sleep.

Critiques are welcome :D

Angel Androgynous
December 30th, 2011, 01:40 AM
You're a genius and deserve a gold star on your paper. C:

http://learningfundamentals.com.au/wp-content/uploads/gold-star.jpg

Antagonist
December 30th, 2011, 01:44 AM
I haven't gotten one of those since kindergarten! :3 thank you :D