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Mannequin
May 20th, 2007, 11:21 AM
IT
it hurts sooo bad
it makes me want to scream
im trapped in a dark closet
where all i do is sleep

IT
it makes me feel like
i could walk through a raging fire
and nobody, nobody
would even fucking care

IT
it took my life away
it is something i cannot clutch
it nearly takes my breath away
and i cannot do anything about it



this isnt a poem. it doesnt rhyme..idk you decide

Ironic Infidel In England
May 20th, 2007, 12:27 PM
Damn. Prose, but fucking great prose.

Sage
May 22nd, 2007, 12:11 AM
Erm, 'IT' was a book/movie written by Stephen King. You fail.

-Silence
May 26th, 2007, 12:53 PM
I like it, and Austin, you of all people know that it doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem. But good job, I really like this one!