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Magenta
December 21st, 2011, 12:39 AM
Don't be so lonely, little girl.
He likes you, he wants you, little girl.
He says things to you, little girl.
Won't you answer him, little girl?

You are tempting him, little girl.
You can be yourself with him, little girl.
Nothing to be afraid of, little girl.
He doesn't know who you are, right, little girl?

They're just seductive words, little girl.
You're only playing with him, little girl.
You think it's a common game, little girl.
Are you ready for this, little girl?

You are faceless to him, little girl.
You are only a fantasy, little girl.
You set yourself up for this, little girl.
Why do you cry victim, little girl?

You're nothing but a whore, little girl.
It's all you wanted, little girl.
You got tangled up in his web, little girl.
But it's your fault, isn't it, little girl?

One more time, right, little girl?
You'll stop after this, right, little girl?
They're not all like him, surely, little girl?
You'll never be safe, sick and twisted little girl.

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Sorry for the silly repetition. It worked while I was writing it...

RoseyCadaver
December 21st, 2011, 12:42 AM
I really like it, it reminds me of your story :P.

Magenta
December 21st, 2011, 12:44 AM
I really like it, it reminds me of your story :P.

That would be because, while they're not the same event, they are similar, I suppose.

AppealToReason
December 21st, 2011, 12:48 AM
Jo (you're screen name still confuses my small, dumb brain <.<), I really do like your writings (and cat).
I'd love to be able to write or take photos like you do. By the way, the repetition didn't bother me. :P

Magenta
December 21st, 2011, 12:50 AM
Jo (you're screen name still confuses my small, dumb brain <.<), I really do like your writings (and cat).
I'd love to be able to write or take photos like you do. By the way, the repetition didn't bother me. :P

Teehee. ^_^

And thank you. Glad the repetition sort of worked then. No, this did not get you any closer to kidnapping my cat. <3

Fiction
December 21st, 2011, 12:12 PM
Wow. This is amazing. Depressing, yet amazing.

I can definetly relate to this one. The transmission from innocent little girl to whore ><

FullyAlive
December 21st, 2011, 04:29 PM
I like this in my head I read it without the little girl. But I think it's good :)

deadpie
December 28th, 2011, 12:50 AM
so FUCKING GOOD holy fuck write a fucking book already do it write now i'll pay you fifty fucking bu sk

Magenta
December 28th, 2011, 01:20 AM
so FUCKING GOOD holy fuck write a fucking book already do it write now i'll pay you fifty fucking bu sk

o_o

Thank you!
I feel like I should say something else but it's like 1am and I was just like 'dfsgfkjhf deadpie commented, repped me and VM'd me woah'. <-- total noob moment.

Still, really glad you liked it seeing as I've never really talked to you. ^_^ Merci!

letluvbleedred
January 10th, 2012, 08:21 PM
wow that was amazing. ^_^
I liked the little girl part even though its repetitive .

shadowhunter320
January 10th, 2012, 08:32 PM
Interesting, I like the lyrics. Could you pm me the sheet music?(if written)