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Wintergirl_80.0
December 20th, 2011, 10:11 AM
sing sweet songs
of skinny little sticks
but -sh- tell no one
that thier little minds
they are sick
the voices in thier heads
whisper mean little things
"stupid fat ugly"
those little voices scream
worms eatthier eyes
andcause warped views
they make the tiny sticks
see bodies that are huge
mean little thoughs
spread like wildfires
so some little girls eat to thier heart disire
then they gag
on all the food they ate
thier little throats burn
as they flush it all away
other little girls starve
till they are really thin
then they collapse
dead
cuz they are only bone and skin

letluvbleedred
December 22nd, 2011, 06:11 PM
I like. Its inspirational and totally true.

AppealToReason
December 22nd, 2011, 06:15 PM
I like it, but don't like that it is directed at girls since guys do the same thing as well...
Not trying to put the poem down, I just feel like we get ignored sometimes, lol.

TheMightyBruce
December 23rd, 2011, 03:28 AM
I really like that poem and how you wrote it.

Donkey
December 23rd, 2011, 09:01 AM
Eating Disorders -> The Open Book

Wintergirl_80.0
December 29th, 2011, 11:56 AM
sorry bout not including guys. it was written about myself and one of my friends.

Fiction
December 29th, 2011, 03:59 PM
Wow, I love it. So relateable and so pretty.

Spook
January 6th, 2012, 09:34 AM
I like this alot. Even though I can't relate, it still has an amazing depth.

Wintergirl_80.0
February 21st, 2012, 06:12 PM
thank you so much writing is my life peotry lead to raps and rap lead to a new and lovable passion