Mutibann
December 9th, 2011, 03:40 AM
My story's a long one
you won't want to hear
it tends to be sad
and so plagued with fear
Fear of the world
afraid of that town
of the people that kicked me
just when I was down
I'm so full of anger
and pain and disgust
I've been disappointed
there's no one I trust
You don't want to hear this
I get it, I do
but some people are lyin'
so I'm sayin' what's true
I've been betrayed
let down and shoved
it doesn't feel good
to feel so unloved
The taunting won't end
the torment goes on
the story's not over
'til the problems are gone
Thoughts? Opinions? I have more poems like this one if anyone's interested.
you won't want to hear
it tends to be sad
and so plagued with fear
Fear of the world
afraid of that town
of the people that kicked me
just when I was down
I'm so full of anger
and pain and disgust
I've been disappointed
there's no one I trust
You don't want to hear this
I get it, I do
but some people are lyin'
so I'm sayin' what's true
I've been betrayed
let down and shoved
it doesn't feel good
to feel so unloved
The taunting won't end
the torment goes on
the story's not over
'til the problems are gone
Thoughts? Opinions? I have more poems like this one if anyone's interested.